Lost in a cold, snowy forest, a young alicorn prince stumbles his way through the night. Along his path, he meets with a princess of Equestria who takes him in and takes care of him. Surprising enough, she learns he is blind. But she may have a cure for that... another blind filly who needs someone.
This is a OC x Snowdrop fic.
Snowdrop is a blind pegasus filly who is defined through the animation snowdrop
As for the OC, his name is Midnight Storm, an Alicorn colt with a black and red mane with a stone gray coat.
Chapters (1)
awww.
cuteness overload help!!!!!!!!
i'm in update soon k.
god....
This was the shortest bundle of I need more ever.
Seriously.
I need more.
Like now.
OR later.
Whichever comes first.
6657119 Ok ok! Ill write more soon!
I didn't seee this story as that good but if others think so then.. ok
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IT seems simple, but we don't have much to go off of.
I have faith.
Dude this story rocks! Keep on going! :)
cancelled huh? I nearly started to read it before I saw it, well just for the blind theme, this story is getting an upvote.
7127963 I canceled it because I thought now one would be interested... Im not sure if I should bring it back or not
7128220 Only if you feel like it, maybe just try a chapter if you have the time.....you know what?
- If I have the time this weekend I read the chapter and tell you my honest opinion, that should help a little bit more.
I mean I usually like adoption and dissabled people in storys, mental or not because it is something else and I just like psychology.
hhhhmm okay at the start of the chapter you maybe were repeating to much, like "forest in the forest because forest, with the forest".
I know that makes no sense, and I don't know if that actually works like that, but there where three sentences where I thought it was a bit to much.
It is rather late and because of that I don't really know what to think about the part with the child, but I try to describe it anyway.
It started nice, I was somehow really interessted in the fact, that he probably actually wanted to die. I'm waiting for another update of a story where Vinyl is more or less mental unstable, and nearly killed herself because that made her feel more alive and stuff like that. I really like psychology, even if I don´t do it as work. It just made it look a it more serious for him and I like that.
Then there was the part where I don´t exactly know if it was either awesome, bad or just neutral.
I think I could like it, but you don't need to rush anything, I have enough stuff to keep myself busy at the moment.
I would like to have a new chapter please.
7128220 Bring. It. Back.
Neeeeeeeeeeed moooooorrrrrrreeeeeeee pllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssss wrrrrrrittte mooooorrrrre