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The Crimson Leaf

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When the investigation of a mysterious death on the edge of the Everfree forest reveals that there is a mad-pony loose on the streets of Ponyville, Twilight must team up with her friends to catch the murderer, before he or she starts racking up a death toll. The only clue they have... A Blood-red Crimson Leaf.

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icecoldbite

icecoldbite #1 · Oct 16th, 2015 · · ·

A really interesting concept. Think I'm going to stick around, see how this mystery develops. Only thing I'm worried about is if the Pegasus' description will ruin the suspense later on since we know the murderer before the Mane 6 do, but it's really a non issue if you handle it correctly, and could potentially even build suspense, but overall, good start, and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest

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