The official story of the deadly Barrier's origin had never sat right with Andre. Thanks to his brother's unexpected engagement, he's suddenly found himself close to someone who might know the truth.
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Man... That was harsh...
What started as a simple and harmless attempt to protect Equestria, became an unstable instrument of doom for humanity. An accident that could not be reversed.
And instead of admitting it, Equestria hid the truth in fear of reprisals and rubbed out those who got too close...
Wow... This was like reading an episode of the Outer Limits! Nice work
Wow, this is a very interesting take The Conversion Bureau. It also gives the ponies a legitimate reason to create the barrier which no other TCB fic I've read ever does. I do doubt the ponies ability to instigate this kind of perfect cover up, at the very least they would also have some objectors on their side as well. I do wish to see more of this.
Wow that ending was sad at lest he died knowing he was right
You make some of the best Conversion Bureau stories, I really hope you plan to continue "A Man's Revenge" some time soon.
Strange how nobody noticed the disappearances in the first place...
Interesting take on the reasons for the barrier. But ponies will not get fully away with that kind of cover-up hiding (and lying through every orifice) without some manner of repercussion... No one can escape the Karma. No matter where they are in the multi-verse.
Final opinion; Neutral.
dark
equestrians SUCK
can't they just learn don't interact with earth unless your in a reversed displaced aka ponies turning into humans and getting stuck on earth
I want sequel
"I'm sorry about aiding in the genocide of your people but I'm just trying to do what's right for my people!" Ah. So Twilight is one of those good Nazis.