When a wealthy, well connected man's son is forcibly converted, he seeks someone to exact vengeance. The PER targeted the wrong person.
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no sh*t sherlock
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I don't think that's going to deter him. 7/9 of his stories are all Conversion Bureau.
3991592 So true basically makes anything written after that irrelevant.
Oh i hope these motherfuckers get whats coming to 'em.
another TCB story from you
I've been waiting for a story like this.
3991627 Trust me, this guy's TCB fics aren't like the misanthropic ones you're probably thinking of by any stretch.
What kind of world is this?
Non crazy Celestia with no expanding barrier and the potions hust rewrite the body? I really want to know.
So far, seems good.
There is one thing you do not mess with in a mans life. You do not ever mess whit his child or you will suffer his wraith and they have done just that and will diffently pay.
These ponies have no idea what they have done...
A clean hit very nice.
If my brother got converted I would rob a bank or something and hire this man
this reminds me of Assissin's creed but in the TCB universe
isn't there never a alternative form for a conversion bureau then just ponies?
4098948 same
yes yes more
Press 9 for awesome.
I love this story, please have one of get run over by a car so I can yell SHOTGUN!
4009111 EERRR! Wrong. You don't mess with power, plain and simple.
3 down, 2 to go.
The story lives!!! I am excited to see what happens next
Very good
"No one is safe."
~Onslaught, Marvel Vs Capcom
That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait to see what happens next
ohh new chapter
time to kill ponies
This is bullshit. Stabbing into the neck with a dedicated combat knife like you've described would almost certainly server the cartoid arterie/s, causing disorientation and weakness due to blood loss, and killing within a matter of seconds. It's also messy as hell.
Good job man, you delivered another great story.
6392339 Messy: but EFFECTIVE!
Man, these ponies are scumbags.
7417372 damn things *loads RPG* lets kick some pony ASS
Is it me? Or is everypony in the p.e.r as dense as a neutron star?
Are you going to update or am I going to be stuck on a cliff hanger?
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He got converted. The End.
Silly newfoal.
Guns don't kill ponies.
I KILL PONIES.
Flash bang into the front room, get 'em while their disoriented.
You never bothered to finish the ending, so here's my adaptation:
The exterior glass windows of the resturant were blown open, sending a storm of glass inside, what followed was what could only be discribed as a massacre, dozens of 5.56 and 9 milimeter rounds filled the air, killing the rmaining PER inside, a moment later, our protaganist hears the being front door blown open by blasting charges, followed by the clanking of fast, metallic footsteps , and several more gunshots, he cautiously exits the bathroom to find a lone figure, clad in strange armor, sureying the room, he turns, and leaves.