1000 years ago, Nightmare Moon got banished, but just outside of Equestria. She builds an Empire called the New Lunar "Republic". Over the years, they build a mighty Dictatorship. Meanwhile, her and her second in command in the New Lunar Republic, Octavius, fall in love.
This is the epic of the battles and strife of love through war. And what comes after the 1000 year banishment?
As the years progress, their love grows. But when the elements of harmony do something unexpected, her feelings for Octavius suddenly stop.
Love never prevails.
Chapters (2)
looks good!
Nope.
I can't admit the fact that you have just met my expectations.
I knew this day would come.
Shit.
Oh, trust me. It's gonna get good. By good, I mean by the 5th or 6th chapter I'm gonna have to tune it up to mature.
Wait, what happened to the other one?
Which other one?
Wow so far so awsome
Can't wait for later chapters
Writing chap 2 right now. Standby.
Amazing!
I WANT MOAR!!
Done.
I like it!
If you like it, the best thing you can do is share it.
Amaaaazinnnngg~!
A great fic, no errors, but don't you think you went a little harsh on the 2nd language thing? People need practice and feedback.
I know. I'm not the best writer myself. I need lots. I'm such a hypocrite sometimes.
Wait, so Nightmare goes out and founds her Empire, which is a "Republic," which she rules over as Queen (which is reserved for Kingdoms). And she has a "second-in-command" instead of a chancellor or prime minister, making the whole nation a military theocracy. I'm sorry, but pick one form of government and stick with it.
Good story, and is the Republic going to be just a misleading title? Because republic's do not have queens or kings, just lousy bunch of stupid politics. Good day! Can't wait for the next chapter!
You are all right. I will see what I can do to change it.
I'm going to make this really really really sad in the end.
This is the end theme song for the story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OfbXDDQm4A0&feature=youtu.be. I'm still writing chapters, and I think it will amount to about like 20 or 30 chapters, more or less. Hopefully gonna be done within a month.
688583 your Oc has the same position of my Oc, you just got your Oc's story out first
GIVE ME MORREE
