In the 41st Millenium, Equestrians have explored the entire Galaxy, and colonized thousands of planets.
Surrounded on all sides by enemies, they were forced to give up the ways of peace, and to fight for their continued survival.
Please note that "MAREINES" is not a spelling mistake, it is a combination of the words "Mare" (Female Pony) and "Marines"
Mare + Space Marines = Space Mareines
this is hilarious. A 40k ponified story.
Excellent, however there are some things you must know.
They didn't have female space marines, not even in Equestria it is acceptable. It is wrong for them to say SISTERS! They should be the Sisters of Battle or in this case the Mares of Battle.
I see how you turned the Orks into diamond dogs, very clever indeed.
You need to add more into each chapter, at least 1000 words. And don't forget to add the army I love and play in real life.
TYRANIDS!
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Anyway, good luck with this, fix up your punctuation and add more chapters with MORE writing.
Gute Luck!
-Invader Nik
676167 I know, and i understand this perfectly, BUT, due to the Gene seed coming from Celestia, i decided to twist the story a little bit.
And i'll probably have the Brothers of Battle or something.
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This seems to have already been done... Where have I seen this...
676182 Hah. Don't worry, i'll try not to ruin the story too much.
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Do you play the tabletop game? The one with the plastic miniatures?
And if you do, what army do you have
AH~! I know where this has been done~!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1903/Exodus
676202 No. Though i think i shall be buying some, maybe next month, or perhaps later.
And if i do, it'll be the Imperial Guard.
All I have to say is...
...
For the Greater Good!
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NOH
Please add these...
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!
If you do, then many people will be happy...
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hm ok goodluck!
Hhehehe. WH40K meets MLP:FIM. its bound to happen. :D
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Here is something to help you.
http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Warhammer_40,000
Remember Discord is Chaos and should be treated as such. Meaning WH40K Style,
not MLP:FIM.
so who are the primarchs for each chapter?
Who in the hay could possibly be evil enough to represent dark eldar? Great story by the way.