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A year after the nightmare moon incident princess Celestia begins to write letters to her sister luna. Even though she knows luna will never receive them

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I like this.:heart:

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This is a a good one.

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JOYISH NEWS

Joyous news.

Very good. You do a good job with emotion and setting the stage as it were.
However, I would recommend an editor, as there are some grammar issues. Nothing major, but it does affect the story.

Otherwise, awesome job.

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6869001 This is just a boredom story, so I think ill pass on editor

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