Destiny: the predetermined course of one's life.
Destiny is the greatest driver of life. It may lead those caught within itself into great fame, or great madness.
Oak is a pony well associated with destiny. He has know his purpose in life from a very young age. His purpose is thus: to destroy the Elements of Harmony and usher in a new age of darkness and despair. Now if only he was any good at it.
The following is a tale of Oak's journey to complete his destiny, and fulfill his purpose in life. Accompanied by his friend (thought "friend" is a strong word) Nightshade, Oak will allow nothing to stand in the way of his destiny. Well, except maybe himself and his own insanity.
Chapters (1)
FAVED IT LIKE THE FIST OF AN ANGRY ROBOSHI!!!
This is...
Amazingly interesting
A masterpiece, a triumph, a game changer of the fanfic world.. and I'm not just saying that because I helped! Come on Galvin, get your butt in gear and get some writing done, the story must be told!
Well, this was... um. While very well-written from a technical standpoint, the story itself is just kinda... bland. Yes, it's silly, but it's the kind of overused Internet silly I've seen way too many times. I'm not sure what to suggest here. Maybe try having Oak take himself completely seriously and cut out the silly dialogue with Nightshade, and have that be The Joke?
Overall, a \=