When Pinkie Pie wasn't able to find out what happened to that cake, her whole life collapsed. Not being able to face the Cakes with this bad news, she decided to move to Manehatten and take on a new life as a new pony.
Pinkie Pie is now Brilliant Rose, a fashion designer's assistant with an unknown past. Yet day by day, she still wonders. Who did it? She may never know.
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Chapters (1)
update soon
i kinda wanna see brilliant rose meet her friends one year later and seeing twilight's wings
s sorry to bother ya
Pleeeease update soon!
Good little start, some errors here and there, but I'll watch where this goes.
Off to a good start, really. This sounds like a decent concept, which could easily attract some attention if you keep working on it at a constant pace. Keep in mind though, you're portraying Pinkie in a situation which is extremely different from what the show tells us. At some point, that's going to require some backstory for justification.
Also, I would strongly advise you to find an editor to patch up your grammar. Your storytelling is going pretty well overall, but there's still too many small errors throughout the text. Don't get me wrong, but mistakes like these tend to distract a lot of readers from a mostly promising concept. If you want more people to read your story (and I'm guessing that you do), it's best to take care of the grammar early on.