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What Really Happened on Hearth's Warming Eve

This story is based on a theory I have about Hearth's Warming Eve, and how I think it really happened. It is also based on other theories, such as Doctor Wolf's theory that Clover The Clever is Princess Twilight from the future. This is my first story, so I apologize if I'm a little bit rough.

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LakeyallOfHeartsEves

LakeyallOfHeartsEves #1 · Sep 21st, 2015 · · ·

Hmm... Imma enjoy reading this ^^

Johnny Bravo

Johnny Bravo #2 · Sep 21st, 2015 · · ·

Twilight rolled her eyes. She then gasped and said “hey, we should invite our friends too! I mean, who would pass out on time traveling!”

"Hey" should be upper-case."

“it's not bad news is it?”, said Fluttershy, sounding worried.

"It's" should be upper-case."

“maybe you should leave that hear”, said RainbowDash.

"Maybe" should be upper-case and a space between Rainbow Dash."

"In all meh story."
-Johnny Bravo

Maze Tail

Maze Tail #3 · Jan 11th, 2016 · · ·

I love this story I hope I get to see the next chapter

Autum Breeze

Autum Breeze #4 · Jan 15th, 2016 · · ·

i like the story concept, but the way it's written is a bit jaring. if you'd like, i could edit this chapter for you so that others don't find any faults and whine about it