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Fifty Shades of Yellow
Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.
Fifty Shades of Yellow
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Weird yet interesting idea for a story
that video scared the hell out of me. I had my headphones on at max volume.
6398984 thanks for the warning
An interesting idea for sure but, i would find the story more interesting if we didn't know Anon's perspective.
Kind of want to see where this goes. Why does he take Fluttershies shit? How far will the girls go? How much shit can Anon take before he starts opening some arteries? Earned yourself a like and follow good sir.
Good job dude! Another great story!
MOAR plz :3 Also I hope anon don't get tha fucked walked on by flutters... Also Rainbow is a prick in this story. If that was me I would of just told her to go fuck herself in the ass with a pole.
The sheer OOCness here is mind-boggling.
6399547 Because she isn't really doing much--she could only be considered "trying to bully him" in the most technical sense. She's obviously uncomfortable with what she's doing, doesn't have the intentions, desire, or ability to actually threaten him, and is frankly sort of pathetic.
6402656 well yeah true but i wonder when that is going to give? When she asks for more money than she gives her maybe? Or maybe he's just doing this to see Fluttershy get to the top of the food chain then yank the carpet out from under her. Idk but I really want to see where this goes.
Man fuck everyone!
Anon : kay
6408866 Lol!
Bullshit. There is no out of line in a 4 on 1 fight, especially for the 1. I can't believe that she'd give him the same sentence as the chick who fuckin tased a guy at school. Yup sounds like America.
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Sorry about that, yet I regret nothing.
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That's the gist of it.
Ugh. What is even the point of this story? Unless this is a self-insert for someone with an intense bully fetish, I don't get it. The story's set up poorly, the girls are severely out of character (WHY are they even doing this?!), and the main character is nothing more than the universe's punching bag!
The only thing that will save this story is Anon getting his revenge, and the girls getting some much needed and deserved karma.
Man this guy should carry some knuckle dusters around or something. Also if this is going to be put to a vote I say he run over Big Mac, cuff him to his cars hitch/bumper/car window frame and just drag him to the worst, crime laden, ghetto in town. If that doesn't stop AJ then there's always applebloom. Rainbow dash can have her future ruined with a few broken legs. Rarity needs a sex tape on the internet, or at least a facial scar/burn wound. Sunset needs some holes drilled in her hands and Twilight, that genuinely conniving woman, needs her fucking eyes gouged out.
Also if this ends with the MC dropping the bomb that Fluttershy isn't a bully, then having Fluttershy get wrecked by the entire school... well I think that's a perfect way to end this whole thing. With the mane girls having thrown everything they can at him and losing it, their regular lives, any sense of normalcy and having Fluttershy in an ICU for inviting the entire school to a foot party all over her face. Not to mention all the mental scarring that entails. Bullied by a few people in the past Flutters? Well enjoy an entire school of that, then transfer or hang yourself.
With such Rektness I believe I would actually laugh in this fic. I'd laugh a dark, cruel laugh.
My mind is going to dark places reading this fic.
I'm just waiting for when Big Mac finds out what Aj was playing at... Oh the glorious chaos!
Huh, a fic with the mane six as antagonists... This is interesting.
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Something tells me that those scratches are going to be used against him. Maybe Twilight will say that he assaulted her? Honestly hoping for a serious ass kicking on the mane six. Then again I was hoping rarity would get that taser stuffed up her skirt so she could "ride the lightning" so to speak.
Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter! Does Twilight have a crush on me or not? I'm sure Fluttershy may have some feelings and I call myself Indra in this story.
Damn, they just got sprayed with a big can o whoop-ass!
The thing that pisses me off the most about this chapter is that Twilight has absolutely no repercussions for almost getting someone jailed. oh but she feels oh so sorry about the whole thing. Fuck that, she should at least get a suspension or a flogging or fucking something, fucking anything! Guy gets accused of fighting a person off campus, a place a principal has no fucking control over, and almost goes to jail. A false accusation get debunked almost immediately on campus, a place she does have jurisdiction over, and the principal decides to sweep it under the rug. Woman if your going to outright piss in a certain students face could you at least have the decency to lie about it, like you think any kind of recourse will fucking happen. She KNOWS nothing is going to happen, nobody is gonna look into this kind of fucking case with any sort of neutrality.
I think the worst thing about this situation is that it isn't even the worst thing to happen in the American school system. Shits so one sided it hurts. Anon at least call Luna out on her shit.
I have a feeling shit is going to hit the fan soon...
Update?
Why, Twilight? That just seems like an incredibly nonsensical thing to do.
I don't know why but reading this chapter reminded me of what one of the teachers did during my College. Pretty much what happened was that our form tutor was ill so the department head was gonna cover that days lesson, so ask a class we all playfully groaned with annoyance and she had the best reaction. She put both her middle fingers up, remember she is a teacher and head of department, and did a 180 degree turn swearing at the whole class then ran out of the room!
#BestTeacher 10/10
6815328 It's Twilight, a pony who almost started a war and got a lesson in friendship as a 'punishment'
7112816 *sigh* yeah true. Painful, but true.
Whaaaaaaaat? What just happened? I'm so confused
I did nothing wrong!
I'm just waiting for where anon will finally pop.
The truth will out, and it will be glorious.
Holy shit, that escalated quickly.
Wow, Fluttershy is really taking it up a notch. I hope it wasn't her who did that to MY car!
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Fluttershy
Love triangle
You could make some kind of joke chapter, that instead of one of the girls, he will chose a sandwich that has been in the kitchen for a few weeks, just putting it out there
Sorry to say this, but f**k you fifty shades if yellow.(i pick twilight)
Twilight has my vote.
I think it should be fluttershy but you can choose who it is yourself it is your story after all.
I would say Twilight, but Fluttershy connects with Anon as well. Both..maybe? but seriously I would say Twilight. Perhaps some jealousy to see how they feel about the matter, if he was to chose one over the other.
Principal Celestia
Fluttershy. Reasons: because f*ck purple smart (Twilight Sparkle is still best pony!)
Wow, seems that Fluttershy has a thing of Anon. This is getting dangerous. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter?
Ahhhhhhh shit.... This will only get worse by the next chapter
Loving this!
This was dangerous, Anon has to be careful here.
Plus fluttershy's face and her last line made me laugh.
Great chapter Fifty Shades Of Yellow.
Fluttershy please don't turn Yandere! I want to live!!!
7438890 yandere is life dude EMBRACE IT!!