• Member Since 15th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen Jul 5th, 2019

Sir Squidfish


Reader. Editor. Scribbler. Odd.

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Twenty years into the future after... some undefined point in the future. I don't want to say zombie apocalypse or fallout specifically; I leave the Happening up to your imaginations. Let me know what your take on this story is-- I still don't know for sure what is mine. Incidentally, this is not in any way linked with any of my other stories. Just a dark fic for all the ponies who disliked Sunny Skies All Year Round. Leave a comment, please, even if-- ESPECIALLY if-- you didn't like it. Or fave it because it's random. Or whatever. If a lot of people threaten me I'll take it down, otherwise it's just kinda... here.

If you need explanations about the story or just have questions regarding my (in)sanity go ahead and shoot me... a PM.

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Comments ( 12 )

Threaten you? In what fashion?:derpyderp2:

Meh. Dark for the sake of dark means nothing. Needs moar plot. (Actual plot, not pony-plot.) :applejackunsure:

The style of writing here seems to be very fluent, but the ending is not very clear and needs more development.

wtf i just read

by the way, good story

I have no idea how to feel so...

:yay::flutterrage::fluttercry::ajbemused::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::applecry::rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::twilightoops::facehoof::moustache::unsuresweetie::raritycry::raritydespair::raritystarry::pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2:

>>Infinity Blaze Good Input. That's exactly how I felt after writing it.:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2::pinkiesick::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::eeyup:

>>celelorian It's just weird... I kinda just stayed up too late and this happened. If people wanted me to write this as a real story I could... IDK. It would be very different. Good comment. Dark by itself means nothing. This story means... nothing.

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Maybe I should check my Monster intake...

>>Squeaker Oh, you know-- the usual. Lots of thumbs-downs and undercover snipers with peashooters.

I will give you that this is a truly random story it was a nice story just the ending that all for me sooooooooo :derpyderp2: i do tho like maybe the to be a long story i think it would be fun to read. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo talk to you later : 3 :derpytongue2:


PS: ITS JON!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

I'm guessing that when the last bearers of the Elements of Harmony pass on (like I'm guessing they did) everything resets itself, either to undo what went wrong or to keep harmony permanently existent in the world. Or, you know, I'm just majorly over-thinking this. Oh, well. I'm still gonna give you a like, 'cause it was GOOD.

1896416 Thanks!:pinkiehappy: No one else understood it at all, but thanks!

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