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Well, i he does not kill her, he is screwed.
WARNING: contains Thunderlane
That's all i need to know. Let's do this.
Well, you've finally done it... you've finally managed to confuse my irrational hatred. I'm really not sure if I want to kill Thunderlane right now or applaud him for finally taking that horrible bitch down...
6293947 i don't know if i want to hug you or strangle you with some of Rarity's strongest fabric.
6294580 I vote death for TL and Krisprowler, but how to go about it?
6296259 we can't kill all 3?
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Heh, good luck, anons. I'm invincible behind my author powers.
Thank god this story warned me Thunderlane was in this. There is no way I could read a story with thunderlane, that's just asking to get triggered.
Well, when Celestia or Twilight hears about this, Thunderlane is doomed.
6297185 forget that, imagine pinkie. It will be his last party.
6297200 I wonder how Mohawk-flavoerd cupcakes taste?
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6296397 I don't know who you are, but I will find you on Facebook, and I will troll you
6298948 ...... BUAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAA! OMG that is funny! You assume I use Facebook!
I haven't used Facebook for 2 years!
6297204 probably chicken?
6299136 I'll bring the curry :)
6299131 Myspace then
6299148 yummy!
6299428 repeat previous comment for that and all other media. The ONLY media i use is Hangouts, and i have a different name there.
6299758 Curry does go well with chicken.
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... And that's why you always put a password on your phone ladies and gentlemen.
6301860 Something tell me that if Rarity only tell Twilight about all of this, then Thunderlane is a dead stallion.
6299763 what's Hangouts?
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Yo moma and yo moma, now stop double postin~
6302542 It didn't show up the first time.
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This authors version of Thunderlane definitely deserves his own trigger warning
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After all this time, I can't believe you haven't figured out yet that Thunderlane is invincible behind the wall of plot device. Granted, the move it appears he made at the end of the last chapter will raise questions, but we've seen him dumb luck his way out of worse...
6304284 And that "luck" is just a metaphor for bullshit.
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Welcome to reality. There's plenty of bullshit to go around...
6304457 It's just that it feels like lazy writing to me, and i know that TheCamel is capable of much better than this.
I have to say that this was just a bad fic.
Well, I am enjoying it immensely
And i would bet that Thunderlane rapes Sweetie Belle in the next chapter.
Wow... I would feel really bad about this if it were anybody but fucking Rarity...
6311229 define bad. Personally haven't given a like or a dislike
I really liked the detail added but I'm sorry to say you portrayed the victim wrongly. Rape victims don't dismiss what happened into dreams :( And they almost always call the cops immediately :( (The sad faces are because of the inaccuracies, it's terrible what happens to the victims) She would also likely check her phone, the details being there right away :(
I like where it's heading but there are a lot of inaccuracies and inconsistencies. Sorry. It's a good try though!!
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Give this a read then;
http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/11/21/rape-study-report-america-us_n_4310765.html
6312746 I apologize, I did get that detail wrong then.
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Don't get me wrong, it would be FANTASTIC if people who were rape victims all went to the police immediately. I'd be happier than RD on the first day of cider season. You'd think it would be an obvious decision. Sadly, it isn't... many victims immediately change clothes, shower, etc... essentially, they want to clean themselves of the dirt they just experienced. That in turn destroys evidence. Also, going to the police/hospital means mentally reliving it over and over since they need to recount the details. Instead, many victims tend to lock those memories away or subconsciously forget them entirely.
6312534 It is a very inaccurate fic. Rape victims do not just dismiss what happen to them like that. Also, Rarity is an element of harmony. Endangering her would be the same thing as endangering all of Equestria, and something tells me that would count as high treason.
And now i realize that it was all arranged. Good work Camel, i did not see that one coming.
6313229 Yeah, it would be nice. I was taking my own experiences into account, I'm sorry for that. I forgot that others don't think like me or the people around me in that kind of situation, it was inconsiderate of me. I wish others would, males and females both, but it is a pretty daunting task, and I certainly couldn't blame victims for going through such a thing and not wanting to do anything about it.
Wow. That was a nice touch at the end, good job
I'm happy it turned out alright in the end
Groan...
6314214 You mad?
Nice touch!
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Two disgusting ponies that taste even worse together. Honestly, I think I'm just gonna go ahead and edit out this last chapter from my canon.
6314393 You go right ahead and do that you