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TheCamel


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Comment posted by Shpoople96 deleted Dec 7th, 2014

Well, this is gonna get dark...

Whoa, this seems great. Can't wait for more.

I knew this was you as soon as I saw the Thunderlane warning.

Though what sort of restriction is good for anthro but not feral? :rainbowhuh:

Man... After all the shit that the Crusaders endured together, it's hard to believe that their friendship was so paper thin... I guess I know who the focus of my hatred is going to be this time around.

But really now, this is one of the darker setups I've seen in a while... To be right there in the spotlight with what should have been a dream come true, and yet in reality she's still completely invisible... so alone and hopeless... Can't wait for the rest of this one..

That delicious cliff hangar. I want more!!

This won't end well...

Hold on a moment.... a rapist that abuses Scootaloo... and this is a story by Thecamel.... THUNDERLANEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

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There is also fair warning in the description...

5354736 I FUCKING KNEW IT!

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...why would you expect anypony else?

5354743 Maybe you wanted to switch it up a little?

5354775 So, drugs and rape... can we expect anything else?

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...is there anything else usually expected in my stories?

5354797 And let me guess, Thunderlane is just going to get away with everything as always.

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Hey, he got caught in Broken Hearts and Diamonds, didn't he?

5354805 I have not read that one yet.

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You're missing out big time then

5354817 It seems a little 2 dark 4 me.

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Read it, wuss.

5354869 Maybe after you finish all your "on hiatus" stories.

5354894 Or else what? Are you going to send Captain Ray after me?

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Nah. After Fluttershy again. And he won't fail this time.

5355184 I must admit that if he succeeds, then all of griffin kind is doomed.

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Oh man, that's dark... We should totally do that...

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That we should, but only because your new avatar here has the PERFECT facial expression reaction to that idea...

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Heh, I just couldn't resist that "Oh Celestia! I can never unsee this...!" face...

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It's the same to some


I am not amused... but I do hope the time is changed by now. -AOW

"Contains appearances by Thunderlane."

Laughs I can't wait to see how this fictional character reacts to your portrayal. -Kamarav

...I'm sure this is a wonderfully written story. But I do not condone Scootabuse unless it ends well. I cannot read this!
But have a thumb anyway.

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Welcome back to the wonderful world of FimFic, where "nothing is sacred" is in fact the only rule...

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It appears a tomb does not keep one from it's insane mind. If you've ever known that you would be asking it's forgotten Kingdom.. -Kamarav

Thunderlane, I feel sorrow for you. -Kamarav THE EYES

Really? -AOW

Yes, to see him as such a insane thing like Corr'ider by that I mean No.-Kamarav

I do hope the Thunderlane knows that justice runs in crimson rivers.

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It more than likely would if there was anypony on Scoot's side in this...

5358924 I'm certain RD would help out if she knew.

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I somehow doubt Scootaloo is going to tell her that she's getting abused in exchange for (probably) illegal drugs she's using to up her wing strength so she can join the Wonderbolts with the hopes of one day getting in her pants... I don't know, maybe that's just me...

5358965 Maybe RD just walks in on Scoots as she is injecting the stuff into her and demands to know where she got it. It would also not surprise me if the stuff Thunderlane is giving her is making her wings weaker so that she has to be his little bitch forever.

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Thunderlane? Giving out illegal drugs?

:trollestia:

5359008 Nah, he would NEVER do such a thing, now would he? He is such an upstanding and respected member of the equestrian society.:trollestia:

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Of course. Thunderlane is best pony. :rainbowlaugh:

5359055 Also, may i make a suggestion for something that might happen in this story?

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... That may be the single funniest thing you have ever said...

Not only is Thunderlane a rapist but he also sells illegal drugs.....dam camel you really love Thunderlane as a antagonist...I also like it.

This story is great :pinkiecrazy:

Urgh... I'm feelin' your pain, Scoots. I hope you get out soon girl, one way or the other...

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