Man... After all the shit that the Crusaders endured together, it's hard to believe that their friendship was so paper thin... I guess I know who the focus of my hatred is going to be this time around.
But really now, this is one of the darker setups I've seen in a while... To be right there in the spotlight with what should have been a dream come true, and yet in reality she's still completely invisible... so alone and hopeless... Can't wait for the rest of this one..
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Well, this is gonna get dark...
Whoa, this seems great. Can't wait for more.
I knew this was you as soon as I saw the Thunderlane warning.
Though what sort of restriction is good for anthro but not feral?
Man... After all the shit that the Crusaders endured together, it's hard to believe that their friendship was so paper thin... I guess I know who the focus of my hatred is going to be this time around.
But really now, this is one of the darker setups I've seen in a while... To be right there in the spotlight with what should have been a dream come true, and yet in reality she's still completely invisible... so alone and hopeless... Can't wait for the rest of this one..
That delicious cliff hangar. I want more!!
This won't end well...
Hold on a moment.... a rapist that abuses Scootaloo... and this is a story by Thecamel.... THUNDERLANEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
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There is also fair warning in the description...
5354736 I FUCKING KNEW IT!
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...why would you expect anypony else?
5354743 Maybe you wanted to switch it up a little?
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Nah...
5354775 So, drugs and rape... can we expect anything else?
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...is there anything else usually expected in my stories?
5354797 And let me guess, Thunderlane is just going to get away with everything as always.
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Hey, he got caught in Broken Hearts and Diamonds, didn't he?
5354805 I have not read that one yet.
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You're missing out big time then
5354817 It seems a little 2 dark 4 me.
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Read it, wuss.
5354869 Maybe after you finish all your "on hiatus" stories.
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R.E.A.D. I.T.
5354894 Or else what? Are you going to send Captain Ray after me?
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Nah. After Fluttershy again. And he won't fail this time.
5355184 I must admit that if he succeeds, then all of griffin kind is doomed.
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Oh man, that's dark... We should totally do that...
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That we should, but only because your new avatar here has the PERFECT facial expression reaction to that idea...
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Heh, I just couldn't resist that "Oh Celestia! I can never unsee this...!" face...
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It's the same to some
I am not amused... but I do hope the time is changed by now. -AOW
"Contains appearances by Thunderlane."
Laughs I can't wait to see how this fictional character reacts to your portrayal. -Kamarav
...I'm sure this is a wonderfully written story. But I do not condone Scootabuse unless it ends well. I cannot read this!
But have a thumb anyway.
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Welcome back to the wonderful world of FimFic, where "nothing is sacred" is in fact the only rule...
Intriguing if I like chapter two this story might make it onto my amazing stories shelf.
no......