Well, this just advanced from "painfully dark" to "hopelessly dark"... Once again, you've outdone yourself, love.
I can appreciate holding off on full-blown rape, for whatever reason, but even without that, this final revelation makes this completely irredeemable. Even if the others rescue her from this hell she's forced herself into, her dreams of being a Wonderbolt are officially dead and the odds of getting with Rainbow are pretty slim, especially if she finds out that Scoots has been juicing... Also, I can't believe I didn't anticipate hoofies being involved in this somehow, as they're synonymous with your Thunderlane.
Give it time... once more viewers see it you'll see it blow up.
But also, hard times falling on Scootaloo isn't new. I seem to recall a certain story about Scootaloo being almost killed and then enslaved being exponentially more cruel than this one...
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Good chapter but was hoping Thunderlane would have had like 9-10 friends he could have rape train Scoots through the entire night.
Why do I like rapey druggy fics?
5359089 That's a cold thing to suggest. Apropos.
*Ahem*
More bondage, please?
Well, this just advanced from "painfully dark" to "hopelessly dark"... Once again, you've outdone yourself, love.
I can appreciate holding off on full-blown rape, for whatever reason, but even without that, this final revelation makes this completely irredeemable. Even if the others rescue her from this hell she's forced herself into, her dreams of being a Wonderbolt are officially dead and the odds of getting with Rainbow are pretty slim, especially if she finds out that Scoots has been juicing... Also, I can't believe I didn't anticipate hoofies being involved in this somehow, as they're synonymous with your Thunderlane.
2.bp.blogspot.com/-QHJASOTZzEI/VAI-E5MxAxI/AAAAAAAAYeE/_x2I01ZZ2u8/s1600/be%2Bright%2Bback%2BI'm%2Bgoing%2Bto%2Bneed%2Bmore%2Btea%2Bfor%2Bthis.jpg SIMPLY AMAZING!
Honestly, I really expected there to be more blowback from the community by this point. I guess Scootabuse isn't all that frowned upon after all...
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Give it time... once more viewers see it you'll see it blow up.
But also, hard times falling on Scootaloo isn't new. I seem to recall a certain story about Scootaloo being almost killed and then enslaved being exponentially more cruel than this one...
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Ah yes... That really got out of hand in a hurry, that one... I really need to reread that.
Congratulations your story has met the requirements to be placed in my amazing stories shelf. And as per my code if one of an authors stories makes it into my amazing stories shelf I follow them.
Sincerely
DJ Bass Breaker
(General Lunar Spartans)
5364643 KABOOOM, I bring...thunderlane?