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WickedLSDragon


Those who express the most happiness, are the ones who have felt equal measures of sorrow.

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This was a prompted fic for an OC fighting competition.
Here is the link to the thread.

An up and coming mixed martial artist by the name of Crimson Luminance seeks out a professional boxer to test his mettle against a seasoned competitor. And when Crimson finds his opponent at Ponyville's bar, he just can't resist the chance to challenge him.

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Comments ( 10 )

6402773

Yeah, but that is where the story was dragging me to, so I wrote it.:applejackunsure:

6402784

Cool, thanks. I haven't edited it yet. I had to get it done quickly for the contest and I had to write it in under 24 hours.:applejackunsure:

Yeah, this fic kicked my plot. I am still fatigued from writing this.:ajsleepy:

So what did you think about the fight sequence? And the story overall?

6402820

Yeah, well the fight had to be in a bar, that was the setting. And Golden wasn't the type to invite some random fighter to fight him in a bar. But Crimson does like to seek out fighters all over Equestria to test himself against. I tried my best to make the encounter as unridiculous as I could.:applejackunsure:

6402773 I thought Pinkie would show up and kick the crap out of both of them. Then drag her new "friend" away. Not a pony fight club.

6414130

Oh, well my apologies.:fluttercry:

Did you enjoy the fight though?

6414609No apologies need you didn't write it just for me LOL. It was a bit long but yes. It just seemed to me it was headed some place else at first.

Pretty good, the fight was good, but that was bit too extreme, I mean it's was just a exhibition so it was just a simple fight right and it turned into a beat down.

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