I definitely didn't include that last exchange just to make the chapter title a Beatles reference. Nope.
You mean it wasn't a reference to this?
Wonder how Fleur and Shawn'll meet. Crash-into hello? Save her life? Defend Coco from unruly types? Or a simple greeting? Possibilities... And on another note, yay Coco!
“Just call me the Eggman,” I replied, not missing a beat. To my great surprise, Breeze burst out laughing. “Don’t tell me you got that!” I exclaimed.
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“Are you kidding?” Breeze asked, wiping her eyes. “You know how much of a Beatles fan Sven is? We listen to them so much I swear I know the words to their songs as well as he does!”
That was great I think you introduced all the characters pretty well So is just Fluer or is Coco going to kind of fall for him as well As another note I'm glad Coco found a place in your fic. I also like how you made Fluer and Coco sisters pretty cool I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
*Whistles* Holy cow. I don't often say this for many fanfics even if I upvote and fave them. There are only a few writers who really 'earn' what I'm about to say (to me at least).
This... this is actually shaping up to be a really, really good story. You've got a decent pacing going and you're introducing the characters nicely. You don't repeat the same phrases (One of my peeves when it comes to writing) and you're damned good at describing the scenery. I gotta say this is a solid fave and upvote from me and I will definitely be keeping an eye out for chapter updates. For the story, and because I don't see very many Human x Fleur stories. Keep up the good work man.
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Yep. Gdocs buggered up my formatting or something. Had to do it again.
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Well, that's annoying...
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Ya might want to put the word out.
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Just made a blog post, that should help.
Final-fuckin-ly, now to see if I changed your mind to one of those trouble in paradise scenarios.
I thought you were making a sonic joke lol
6483328 wow that was short. (Thats what she said to you last night in bed!!!) ;) ohhhhhh!!
Lol no I'm in a silly mood.
The Beatles had a 'the eggman' song too?
You mean it wasn't a reference to this?
Wonder how Fleur and Shawn'll meet. Crash-into hello? Save her life? Defend Coco from unruly types? Or a simple greeting? Possibilities...
And on another note, yay Coco!
Yesssss, there is more enjoyment to be had...
Now I shall slink into my cocoon of sleep and enjoy thoughts of ponies and jokes and breakfast supper......ok, I'm more tired than I though.
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The Beatles reference.
I loved this chapter, especially Coco and Fluer's bond and Evening Breeze's character. Keep up the good job,
6483328 glad you got it semi worked out. Not a bad chapter. I'd like to go to that resort. I'd blow my life savings on it.
Where you said paramount to blasphemy you really meant Tantamount, other than that, excellent chapter
woo! i loved the premise of this fic and i cant wait for more.
Great chapter, hope to see more soon.
My mind's eye paints the entire resort similar to the Citadel from Mass Effect.
You need to fix the monorail link.
If you would please give me your address, I would like to send you all of my yes.
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There's a lot of it.
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Ha ha thanks!
I thought it was a Sonic reference. Still good chapter can't wait for the next one.
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the titles are coming from the song. I am the Walrus. By the Beatles. I was one of the most trippy ones out there.
I'm just waiting to see what your excuse will be for shoving him into a yellow submarine and sending him off on an adventure.
Do you mean 2 PM? Or does it mean from 6 AM to 2 AM the next morning?
Now Shawn has checked in. I look forward to seeing how this plays out. BTW, are all the chapter titles going to be Beatles songs?
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Hey, don't be mad!
Waiting for the moment when Mr Eggmann's gonna learn abaut pony types.
That was great I think you introduced all the characters pretty well So is just Fluer or is Coco going to kind of fall for him as well As another note I'm glad Coco found a place in your fic. I also like how you made Fluer and Coco sisters pretty cool I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
6495240 No, they open at 6 am and stay open until 2 am. That gives them about 4 hours to clean up and get ready for breakfast.
"swiftly became a feature"
it swiftly became a feature
*Whistles* Holy cow. I don't often say this for many fanfics even if I upvote and fave them. There are only a few writers who really 'earn' what I'm about to say (to me at least).
This... this is actually shaping up to be a really, really good story. You've got a decent pacing going and you're introducing the characters nicely. You don't repeat the same phrases (One of my peeves when it comes to writing) and you're damned good at describing the scenery. I gotta say this is a solid fave and upvote from me and I will definitely be keeping an eye out for chapter updates. For the story, and because I don't see very many Human x Fleur stories. Keep up the good work man.
who's leg would I have to 'hump' to get that room as my house?
You know how much of a Beatles fan Sven is
I have an original 1967 Beatles vinyl record hanging on my wall in my house! REST IN PEACE JOHN!!!
Well, I thought of...
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I thought the exact same thing.