It lives.

"Who the Hell do I think I am?" the colt demanded, wrenching his arm free and rubbing it. "My name is Gizmo, and you're looking at the guy who designed this place!"

"I don't care. You're a fuckin' pervert. Get out."

***PUNT!***

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I was thinking more like this:

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If gizmo was some sort of black color with green eyes I was gonna break something

I was kinda hoping for an appearance from Tia.... Considering the Title of the chapter and all.... But this is okay too....

I could care less if he's the guy who designed the place. Doesn't mean you get free run to be a prev like that!

6256761 Nice Beatles reference.

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Thanks! I thought it would add a funny dynamic to the story.

How is looking at someone on the beach being a pervert?

looks like some one got caught.

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Looking is fine but concealing yourself while peering at them through binoculars is morally ambiguous at best. Shawn seemed to think so, anyway and I'm sure he has his reasons.

Awesome to see this updated. Hope there will be more coming!

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Oh, absolutely, now that I have a coherent plot in my head.

It lives? bloody hell

7616458 Awesome, can't wait to see more.

Also if you have ever need of help I could offer in prereading for you, if you so wish.

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Thanks for the offer. I've always been my own pre-reader and editor but I'll definitely keep that in mind.

7616494 That's cool. I tried to to do the same thing with my stories but I'm not that good editing. I would have others help me out and get those sorted.

*Sees update, checks last chapter* Holy shit, has it really been a year since this was last posted? Damn, I'm glad you're still alive, but still.

I honestly thought this story was abandoned, but it looks like the updates are going to be random are far as when they appear. Now, is this really the creator of this place? If he wasn't peeping, what was he doing?

Great to see an update.

No matter how short the chapter.
No matter how long it takes.
No matter What my personal situation.

I will always get at least 40% hard when I see this update.

Hey man I'm still working on that special project for you. I had to restart it but it's coming along better now.

This is very well-written.
Y'know, for a mature fic which is clearly lining up for some sexy-times.
Lol jk but for srs, it's nice to see things progressing smoothly along rather than BAM, SEX! SEX EVERYWHERE!

Great to see you are still working on this exellent fic, keep it up!!

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So it must be akward sometimes huh?

Sorry for the big reading delay, man! High School started this month and only 2 days ago I found my reading list. Speaking of- orktober is the month of well written clop hitting the market!

As for the chapter itself. Coco is this story's fluttershy. The rest is a wild card.