"Oh, uh, wow," I stammered. It's weird, right? Four seconds ago, I was chatting her up like we had been best friends since childhood. "My Best Friend, Fleur", I thought with a small grin. Wouldn't that make for an amusing short story?
7648268 Maybe but I feel like I'd be ripping off the good Mr. Flammenwerfer if I blatantly used his title style. I actually ran something like that past him already.
7666588 "I had the odd dream where I've seen formula with symbols I didn't know that didn't look like math at all. Which served as a baseline for everything you see around you". If I wanted a project like this to succeed without Royal everything all over it, this would be just about the most foolproof plan to kickstart things into motion.
Holy mica shist mate. Ok, normally, when I find a "sensual" fic, it turns more raunchy. And that turns me away. But this, this is pure gold. You have done an AMAZING job with this story. I had found it when it first came out, then totally couldn't remember what it was called. I was looking through my "need to find quickly" list (totally need to rename it lol) and I refound it. I was so happy to catch up with it all again. And I am uber excited to see where it goes. I absolutely cant wait for the next updates.
8548054 I think it's a mix of two things. A lot of people enjoy the Beetles, which makes that comment an unpopular opinion. The other issue is probably the fact that it had nothing to do with the story itself and was made for the sole purpose of being unpleasant, which was unfortunately a result of an earlier confrontation. It's annoying but what can you do?
Okay, I know I said "no more musing" but seriously; she wanted to hear about my life? As far as lives go, mine was pretty par for the course for a fellow my age. It wasn't bad, just average. It's a different world, sure, but surely there are similar positions in life on Equis and young people filling those positions. I made a mental note to ask Fleur about positions at some point.
Did you really expect us not to take that sentence dirtily?
I've got to say I'm really enjoying this one and I can't wait for the rest.
It's so nice to find engaging, well-paced dialog sequences.
Sounds like they're all having a good time.
That wouldn't be a bad title for this story.
MORE PLEASE!!!
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Maybe but I feel like I'd be ripping off the good Mr. Flammenwerfer if I blatantly used his title style. I actually ran something like that past him already.
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Oh man, he'd go insane for that!
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He already have two similar titles, with Luna and Stella. I'm sure he would not mind.
Glad to see the dust blown off this story. Liking where it's going. Maybe not so much that it kept me up later than I should be, but whatevs.
Jeep it up!
Nice chapter, loved all the bonding in it.
Nice Bioshock reference
Cool aerosmith song reference
Cool reference to aerosmith
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I made an Aerosmith reference?
You CLEVER BASTARD. I would give my right kidney for that story.
7649677 yeah look up aerosmith come togther... Now that I think about its originaly a Beatles song but they did a remix. it's the latest title name
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Which is exactly why I approached the fellow to see if he was interested in something like that. Nothing yet but we'll see.
This is an excellent chapter! I love the engaging dialogue between Shawn and Fleur. Really adds to the story and believable.
I also enjoyed the references you inserted. Particularly the Bioshock one. This is a really good chapter and I can't wait for more.
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Once I'm settled with my new computer, we'll see what we can do.
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Right on, glad you're enjoying it! It means a lot coming from you, dude. Thanks for the feedback!
Your virginity?
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We shall see. We shall see...
Hmm. So Luna found a fitting vessel for her idea? Neat. Being able to create and see your creation take life makes long lives worth living.
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Did I...miss something? What about Luna?
7666588 "I had the odd dream where I've seen formula with symbols I didn't know that didn't look like math at all. Which served as a baseline for everything you see around you". If I wanted a project like this to succeed without Royal everything all over it, this would be just about the most foolproof plan to kickstart things into motion.
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Very interesting theory but not actually what I was going for. Wouldn't that make for an interesting side story, though?
Update soon!
Holy mica shist mate. Ok, normally, when I find a "sensual" fic, it turns more raunchy. And that turns me away. But this, this is pure gold. You have done an AMAZING job with this story. I had found it when it first came out, then totally couldn't remember what it was called. I was looking through my "need to find quickly" list (totally need to rename it lol) and I refound it. I was so happy to catch up with it all again. And I am uber excited to see where it goes. I absolutely cant wait for the next updates.
The beetles suck.
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HERETIC
BLASPHEMY
BURN DA WITCH
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At the time of this comment: 11 people can't stand it when someone doesn't like what they like.
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I think it's a mix of two things. A lot of people enjoy the Beetles, which makes that comment an unpopular opinion. The other issue is probably the fact that it had nothing to do with the story itself and was made for the sole purpose of being unpleasant, which was unfortunately a result of an earlier confrontation. It's annoying but what can you do?
Did you really expect us not to take that sentence dirtily?
Hell if I know.
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His eyes, his limbs, his sanity, his life...