1580077 Thanks for the interest. I've been reading this offline mostly and I think it's really good. It looks like you don't have an editor though. I've been considering editing for you but I'm not sure what would be best: submitting individual fixes or submitting the whole chapter again with the mistakes fixed. When I say edit, I mean to fix the little things. You have many mistakes like 'f' instead of 'of' and 'too' instead of 'to'. Some of these I can read over easily but some of them make me stop and think about what you actually meant. The ones that interrupt the flow of the story are the serious ones. Do you use spell check? Do you re-read it before you submit it?

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Probably not enough time on my story. Very unfortunate

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Oh, my bad. Thank you. Also, thanks for the page of "Helpful Tips."

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Huh. You seem to have removed the relevant module from your user page. It's the one called "Watching."