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Brilliant plots, total dick.

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Jacket was definitely someone you'd miss in public, no one would care if he just disappeared from the face of Equestria but that doesn't hurt him. Nothing can hurt him anymore, no one could hurt him anymore, and even then he doesn't care about anything.

Does he even care about himself?

As Jacket keeps looking over his shoulder in fear, the guilt, the blood he's spread, the lives he's taken are clouding his mind. And as much as Jacket tries to deny his emotions, his remorse, he cannot take it anymore. Without the masks giving him the personalities he need, all he is is a mute, timid colt with nothing to lose but his undeserving life.

As he tries to adjust to a life outside of bloodshed and mental breaks, he does one last job. That is, until one leap of faith into the neon soaked blood bath is going to flip his entire spectrum of reality upside down as he continues to look over his shoulder, and look deeper into his mind and solve the question that's been on his subconscious.

Is he enjoying killing other ponies?


Princess Twilight Sparkle was definitely someone you cannot miss in public, every pony would care if she just disappeared from the face of Equestria but that doesn't matter to her. Nothing matters anymore.

Does she even matter?

Fluttershy has been kidnapped, her sudden quick prone to aggression is changing her, and one leap of faith into the neon lights is going to flip her entire spectrum of reality upside down as she continues to look deeper into her own mind and answer the biggest question she's ever faced.

Does she like hurting other ponies?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

Great writing, and indeed very true to the gaming series as it's integrated into the MLP universe. Can't wait to see more from you! Very promising! :D

Amazing, keep it up:pinkiehappy:

..You want money? Drugs? Mares?! I cna get you anything, just let me go!...

He cna get him literally anything!
But if he CAN is another question.

Wait, what if she tossed the second gun in the same direction she threw the first magazine?

will you ever update this?

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Yes and no.


Yes, I will return to the story in the future. I had a lot of fun writing the story chapters and such, feel like I fleshed out Jacket's character, and cross the lines between sanity and insanity.


No, it will be a good while before I do return. I have other works to further advance and hopefully complete, honestly this story is shelved for now amd will remain on hiatus until further notice

Very nice. Good job.

Nice, you make Twilight fight like Evan (The Writter from HM 2). Starts with non-lethal attacks, but when gets angry, starts using lethal attacks. Smart, very smart.
Very good chapter, too. I will await with patience until this story's returns.

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