Seraphim from supreme commander. Restoration fields will defeat all of you!
Centuries after Equestria's defeat, mankind has become the new symbol of resistance to an unknown yet ever-present enemy. The awakening of two creatures, some of whom would dare call gods, will forever change man's knowledge of both this unknown enemy, and the forces that it had been censoring for many millennia.
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Interesting so far, it there going to be ponification? Dunno for some reason Pony features(cutie marks cloud walking) on humans seems wrong but as the start of a pony transformation... eh author's call in the end. I do like how you stat in the summery that human society NEARLY relies on Chaos, but just remember Chaos can never be completely removed from a system just as Order can't be completely removed.
This is pretty interesting . . .
Can't wait for more!
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Toddler just found his talent. Adults kinda miss out on the whole mark thing.
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no ponification. I intend the "abilities" to represent something in the end. Humanity will remain Humanity through the fic.
638884 k does 13 still get a mark as you call it
Interesting idea and story so far.
The grammar was terrible, and while I don't usually care about grammar, it seems as if this was written by a 12 year old.
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Well crap. Sorry about the errors. Anything specific?
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Meh, upon further reading the grammar wasn't that bad, still didn't like it though. Good story concept, but the human OC's were pretty bad.
Turns out I was just in a bad mood earlier. So don't be sad if I was particularly harsh. to be honest, I don't actually know what I don't like about the story, it just rubs me the wrong way.
I went ahead and removed the whole "Tattoo" section of the story. Looking back on it, I think it may have gone a bit too far.
Forget all the dislikes. Write MORE! The idea is interesting.
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Its... going slowly... Will get done though.
Well, It's been a long time now.
Sorry for the massive wait, I suffered many, many, many cases of "lets rewrite this part". I could probably supply you with three fully different chapters from how many times I re-wrote each of the sections here.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy.
PS: If you did not like something, please leave a comment. Even If I do not fix it, I would love to hear what I am doing wrong or right. Same if you liked something in the story really.