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Sera-Pony


Seraphim from supreme commander. Restoration fields will defeat all of you!

Jan
20th
2013

Reasons For Home, CH4, in all its horribly badly written glory... · 6:31am Jan 20th, 2013

This is the thing that I wrote, but never posted due to that the story I was writing turned out to get its greatest critic being the person who wrote it.

I hate what I was doing with this story, the stopping every other sentence to explain everything, the cheap and corny characters, and just how badly planned this whole thing was.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xQaucP4Y6Q5x3jYXAkFWWs7yLzLx63Wkwn-BNPxnWHA/edit

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I'm still alive, my stories will be finished eventually, but I've either improved a bit or I just wrote horribly in my old stuff. I keep on rewriting everything, i'll stop and get something done eventually...

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