Celestia is an amazing pony. Most don't even accomplish half of what she has, and yet just by living she is a breathing example of a feat still unknown to modern science. When Twilight Sparkle gets invited to morning tea with Celestia, she never expected anything other than a friendly conversation between them. What she got, however, was quite the opposite.
This story is kind of deep also, so yeah.
I like the premise and thought put into this. The issue you might be having though is it needs a bit of editing and it kind of just...ends...leaving the ready VERY empty handed as to everything going on. It's a bit TOO short to really get the point of the story across. Nevertheless, i extremely enjoyed seeing a side of Celestia that not many people are willing to show
Yeah, I honestly have to agree. I am going to redo it, so yeah