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The Human Pinkie


Hiya! I'm The Human Pinkie and I love doing SUPER-DUPER fun things like...having fun! I hope I make you smile! :)

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Rarity is annoyed at Pinkie Pie's mane and decides to try and get Pinkie to allow her to fix it for the Grand Galloping Gala. Can she convince Pinkie Pie to let her fix it in time for the Gala?

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Long story and I forgot to fix it. Thanks for telling me! (It was basically 2 am when I wrote this)

5980880 ignore him. He gets off on being a dick.

5981195 Well, I still did fix it. His comments should still be viewed. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger. :twilightsmile:

Continue? Pretty Please? :pinkiehappy:

5981359 I won't directly make a sequel, :fluttercry: but I will pay tribute to my first ever fanfic and reference it. I might do a letter between Rarity and Pinkie about it in my "One Little Letter" so expect something. :twilightsmile: I just don't see how I can make a direct sequal. Sorry for the inconvenience.

5981913 Thanks! This is my first ever fanfic and I'm 12, so I'm glad I did something right.

Nice job! :pinkiehappy:

"You mean to tell me that your not going to even attempt to brush your mane?!"

your should be you're

that it was her who wanted to change

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think her should be she. :derpyderp2:

Pinkie Pie of all people could make her

ponies, not ponies :raritywink:

All in all, a very nice fanfic, I hope your next fanfic is even better! :pinkiehappy: I made my first fanfic when I was 12, too, so I can relate! :pinkiesmile:

5984062 Thanks! Sorry about those mistakes. I'll fix them! (It was like 2 am when I wrote this so yeah) I'll get better, promise!

5984315 Awesome! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see your next story!

5984666 I have another one out now, but it's not technically a story. :derpytongue2: It's pretty much just a bunch of letters. I'll work on it! :twilightsmile:

5984710 :pinkiehappy: For now, I've gotta come up with an idea for a one-shot soooooo see you later!

Rarity fell back in shock, truthfully this time. Pinkie Pie's words seemed to mock her, even put her down the slightest bit. Anger started to boil inside Rarity, so much that it threatened to etch every line of her face. It was if someone had stolen one of her jewels, or sabotaged one of her dresses. She didn't think Pinkie Pie of all people could make her this angry, but she did, and Rarity didn't even know what to say anymore. She didn't even know what to do .

Consider placing an "as" between "was" and "if".

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