• Member Since 30th May, 2015
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Xthepony1258


So, I am really bad with fanfics but I am usually a nice guy, just don't get me real frustrated. you won't like me mad. I'm more of a gamer, but i decided what it would be like writing fanfics.

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(Inspired by Studio Pixel's "Cave Story")

One day during a special stroll across Ponyville, Fluttershy caught word of a island that "plummeted from the sky." What she finds are 2 white ponies that seem to be as kind as her. But are they actually ponies?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 4 )

I had to make this very late in the night. So at some parts I might not be thinking correctly :derpyderp2: I think I got the points in the story correctly but idk I am a bit tired.

Please pick one tense (past or present) and stick with it. Though that's the least of your problems...

6143694 I tried the best I can to do that :applejackunsure: Like I said, I made this very late in the night.

Love this story i finished it in less than ten minutes can you write another chapter please?

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