(Inspired by Studio Pixel's "Cave Story")
One day during a special stroll across Ponyville, Fluttershy caught word of a island that "plummeted from the sky." What she finds are 2 white ponies that seem to be as kind as her. But are they actually ponies?
I had to make this very late in the night. So at some parts I might not be thinking correctly I think I got the points in the story correctly but idk I am a bit tired.
Please pick one tense (past or present) and stick with it. Though that's the least of your problems...
6143694 I tried the best I can to do that Like I said, I made this very late in the night.
Love this story i finished it in less than ten minutes can you write another chapter please?