I am just a simple guy, creating stories for the fun of it.
This story is a sequel to A Hopeful Downfall
I have been through Hell and back. But when a threat comes that not even I may be able to stop what will I do for the ones I care for? Friendship will not win this battle, but Hope in itself has a chance. And I will use the Hope in my heart to do the impossible, to do whatever I can.
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Hope it reminds me of the Blue Lantern Corps
6118292 I don't understand that sorry.
Oh my bad Green Lantern in the show the Blue Lantern Corps is the physical manifestation of Hope.
6118411 Huh, you know I think I might check that out.
Hopefully, it a great movie and tv series if you have a Netflix account go there if not go to Google and type Green Lantern The Movie or Green Lantern animated series.
6118435 I will, thanks bud!
No problem
I think it would be appropriate if you place the comma between: "here" and "they". and between "However" and "none".
"Made"
"single" "up and then" "alley way".
"crowd."
The premise and intro is good. Your writing seems to be getting better. Still needs improvement. Might I suggest for the next chapter that you try to add more dialogue between the characters, especially if your character is in the company of the mane six. I'm liking where this is going. I shall keep a close watch.
6119973 Thanks for the comment! I do appreciate it and I shall try to increase dialogue. But I have to say that is not one of my best things to do in writing, I don't know why but I always have trouble putting the other characters voice into play. But hey, practice makes perfect I suppose. Thanks again for the comment.
Not bad. Not bad. The head hopping was pretty smooth. No complaints on this chapter.
6160641 Thanks bud! I'm glad to see you are enjoying it thus far.
Cool
Here's a song for your story
This was interesting.
6215653 It probably seems rushed doesn't it? I am sorry if anything appears to be wrong with it. But as I explained in the chapter, I was very tired.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
6716961 Thanks bud!
6716961 Looks like that chapter ain't coming out anytime soon aye?
7271067 I'll be still waiting!