Despite the name, as cheesy as it is This Adventure is epic! With action, drama, and plenty of other challenges along the way. Daring Do has only been asked to work with one pony one time before, which was Rainbow Dash. Though this mare had proved to be a lot of help and one who she can trust, this time things are different. She isn't trilled with this idea, and she isn't going to be for quite some time. How she's going to do this she doesn't know. Whatever is out there, adventure awaits with...
These ponies?!
Chapters (3)
Needs some work, but a kinda nice story! (Needs some explaining!) :3
6087230 Um, thanks? What do you advise me on explaining further? If you are to say somethings wrong with it, then try being a bit more specific.
6087249 I mean the story itself, it's confusing.
6087299 Either that, or my brain decided it was too late (were I'm at it's midnight)
6087300 I am not sure how the story would be confusing. What made it so? I had some people read over it and I never got that reaction before. So if there is anything specific then I'll see if I can explain it or change it if need be, but if there isn't anything that makes it "confusing", it would just be a hollow remark that holds no value. ^^;
6087306 Sorry, the story is fine, but at the time of that comment, my brain was shutting down. So the story that made sense to regular awake me didn't make sense to half-asleep me. xD
6088102 XD Don't worry happens all of the time. Sorry if I seemed a little defensive. I was tired too. XD
Dun dun DUUUN, now we wait! x3
great story. update soon please