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Brony0815


My little pony

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I'm trying to get world record of most dislikes.
As some strange magic comes into Ponyville it will be become strange a.k.a not Discord and will have strange story's about each Charachter I'm pretty random so I my story's will just come to me while I'm writing to had to the strangeness of each short story.Please comment way you hate about I'm making a new story with better grammar Please leave in comment

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Your shit grammar makes this shitty fic shittier. From what I was able to skim (note that I even said that), this is terrible. There's no cohesion.

So, uh, I only read the first paragraph. I have no desire to read anymore.
Try using grammarcheck.net
And for gods sake, practice practice practice.

XiF

Was this supposed to be funny? Har, har.

--vomits on self--

"I have fixed grammer probelms" fail.

I have the deepest desire to give you a concussion.

Maybe then you could be able to write something halfway decent. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_hmph.png

*Generic humorous comment about how bad this was*

From description: 'Please leave in comment and you can skyrim to a more pony like name'
What does that actually mean? Or, better question, what was it meant to mean?

621764"I have fixed grammer probelms" fail. Now now, don't say he fails at spelling when you failed to notice that it is spelt grammar, not grammer as the description says. Do not insult someone's spelling if you yourself know not how to spell.:facehoof:

To the author: You made more spelling and grammar mistakes in your description than I have pointed out, I suggest you fix these :).

There's 'random' and there's 'putting random words together and yelling HERP DE DERP I'M SO RANDOM LOL while jerking off a chicken' I don't want to be a jerk but this isn't even funny.

I was actually quite amused by this, but the previous comments do have a point. There is more of an art to being random than pure randomness itself. This...half got that, imo.

Worlds most dislikes? Sure I'll drop one here for you.

You know, if you want a really unpopular story, make people like this, but put in your opinions IRL politics, religion etc. and there.
the most dislikes in a fic that I've seen is 289 dislikes. But it had 3000++ likes.

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