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MuddyWaters


Brony. That is all

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[Takes place about five years after season four]

The mane six have saved Equestria plenty of times, and with Twilight, who is the Princess of Friendship, in their midst, they have great magic in them. However, the six best friends are about to face a brand new threat: love and relationships. With some old friends (and a couple not-so-friends) from the past, and a couple new faces, will the six master this new hurdle, or will some pony get hurt along the way? And when a former enemy rises up to take down Equestria, will they be able to use the Magic of Friendship once again to save Equestria? Or will the blossoming romances cause hurt and pain to the friends?

[This is also being posted on Wattpad on my account on there]

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 31 )

The Flim Flam Brothers... Oh Dear

So is this story going to spread out to each Mane Cast in each of thier location of thier POV?
Also, in this story maybe you can reference season 5 a bit just for the lols

Great story!
Continue please!:twilightsmile:

6079256 something like that

And season five will be referenced. Just because I like a pairing with a character from the first episode :derpytongue2:

I'm lucky to be the first person who comment on this chapter and I wanna say it was awesome!
I don't normally read mane six and OC shipping but this one was amazing!
Keep going!

It was really interesting. I honestly liked this chapter better than the first (maybe because I like Rarity better than Applejack) and, I'm guessing you're going to make seperate chapters for each of the mane 6 and then rotate? :pinkiehappy:

Oh and also, I think I know which "character from the first episode" will be referenced and which of the mane 6 he'll be paired with. I won't spoil it for everyone, though, I'll just be like "I told you so!" when the chapter comes.

So those two are trespassing!

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Well, to be honest, I'm only using OC's coz I don't ship two of the mane six with any other character on the show

But thank you for the compliment :raritywink:

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Well, kinda. It won't be in any particular order for chapters. It'll be in order of importance. And some mane six might get a couple more chapters than others (like Rarity who's first part of her story is told plainly from her perspective and there isn't anypony else with her)

I wasn't quite happy with this chapter and to me, the AJ chapters will be more fun to write coz she's best pony to me :ajsmug: but I'm happy you like it :derpytongue2: you should totally message me and tell me who you think it is! I'm curious now

New chapter! Great.:pinkiehappy: I really wanna know who was in the prison. So...
UPDAAAATE!
Sorry if it was rude.:twilightsheepish::twilightblush:

"I let out a gasp when I was who was in it."


You probably mean " I let out a gasp when I saw who was in it"

Great story so far! :pinkiehappy:

Great! New chapter! I hope you update the next soon cause now I can't wait anymore!:pinkiehappy::heart:

New chapter YAY! It was great. Keep your great work!:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

Your story is coming out great so far!:pinkiehappy: And is this chapter kind of an introduction to what's gonna happen in RD's love life? In the other chapters (except for the first one. The first chapter is another example of what I'm talking about) you kinda hinted at who was gonna get who like AJ and Flim, etc. But in the first and fifth chapters, you hinted at how they're gonna fall in love, because AJ and RD aren't the type to fall in love easily, unlike the others. I just said something you probably don't understand, but that's okay because it's not important! :pinkiehappy:

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That comment did confuse me a little bit xD. But I kinda got the gist of it. And yes, it does sort of hint at how Rainbow ends up falling in love, although I don't wanna ruin anything for anyone. I'm glad to see that you are enjoying the book still, and I'm excited to see what you think of the next chapter, which will probably get up next weekend, or maybe earlier this week if I'm lucky at all.

It was amazing and Pinkie's speaking was just fine. Just like how Pinkie normally speaks in the episode.:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

This is awesome. Is the next chapter about Twilight?

:moustache: I was the hero of the Crystal Empire , The Great Honorable Brave Glorious Spike thee Dragon.......

I'm busy doing dishes at the boutique later it's mopping the Crystal castle. . .

If I'm lucky I might have time for a ruby or a sapphire snack...I doubt it though........

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Course Spike was the one who saved the Crystal Empire [not that I like admitting it but eh. One of his few redeemable qualities I guess]. Didn't imply that. I said that Twilight was the one who FOUND the Crystal Heart.

Also, if you haven't noticed, Spike's not really in this story. Mainly because I just don't like his character and can't think of anyway to redeem it while staying in show character. He'll have an excuse. Later on. Probably gonna come up in a Twilight chapter. This book is fixing to be REALLY long...IDK how long but eh. I don't like rushed stories and when I'm focusing on six love stories at once...yeah.

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:moustache: Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
:raritydespair: Spikey Wikey Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Don't know why, but your comment just made me laugh xD Don't worry. I have a good reason why he's gone cooked up. The issue just hasn't come up yet.

In the earliest version of this story [the one in my head], I actually WAS going to have Spike in the story...but my mind seems to like skipping these minor details when I start writing. And I figured if my mind didn't want Spike to be in here, then he probably shouldn't be in here. He's honestly my least favorite characters on the show, and he stars in my least favorite episode on the show. There have only been two alright episodes with him as a major player in it. Three if you count the Crystal Empire I guess. But yeah...I'm rambling about stuff you probably don't care about xD

6276801 It's a shame to let that crush go to waste lots of built in conflict.

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He's a big piece in Twilight & Rarirys little world:twilightsheepish::duck::moustache:

:trollestia: not to mention his messenger roll.

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Rarity will have plenty of conflict without Spike having his crush on her...[never liked that aspect of the show. I'm not completely sure why but I just don't]. She, Pinkie, and AJ all will have a lot of conflict, while Twi's RD's, and Flutter's stories are a bit more simpler.

I forgot about his messenger thing xD Okay. Thank you for pointing that out. Imma have to think of a creative way that Celestia can send messages to Twily now.

I actually plan on having him come back though. Maybe for a couple chapters or so. But he will be back.

AMAZING! Is next chapter about Twilight too?

6277221 nope. There will never be two chapters in a row featuring the same character

6277714 Oh... It's OK. Keep up the good work!

Is Pinkie going to be with Cheese and Rainbow with Soarin? *With hope in my voice*

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