Hello! I'm Dizzy Paws! It's nice to meet you! I hope you enjoy my stories! :) Always feel free to check out all my stories!
This is the long version of my OC'c background story. It will go into more detail and telling you what he goes through. It starts when he is found wondering in the woods and found by the couple. I don't know how many Chapters are going to be total.
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I like where this story is going. The 3rd person present tense is taking a bit of time to get used to, but it's neat because it's different. You've got a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but overall it seems like you've got a cool idea going for your little OC at this point. ^_^
I think one of the things I like best about this is the onomatopoeia that you interject into the story with the 'clip, clop.' lines. It adds a lot of action. Let me know if you need a beta reader. I like where this story is going, I think you just need a bit of help with the grammar and spelling. The story itself has been just darling.
643792 Thank you Enderwinner for your comment. I know i have a few spelling errors (im going to be fixing them this weekend if not during the next week) and most the grammatical errors are meant to be there. Ill make sure to keep you up on the beta reader.
Thank you and enjoy my storys!