Rainbow Dash: Fastest flyer in Equestria, wannabe-Wonderbolt, Element of Loyalty, weather manager, professional slacker and loyal friend. She never thought nightguard would be added to that resume, but here she was, working off a debt created by accident. Five nights in a pizzeria with magic dolls. Easy...if they weren't so "quirky". Get Ready 4 Freddy, Dash.
(Note: This was originally written back when FNAF1 was still new and before new revelations from 2 and 3 arrived, so those are considered non-canon for the purposes of this fic). Set between seasons 4 and 5 of MLP:FIM.
Chapters (8)
Very good
Please make a sequel.
Mad god? When did Sheogorath appear in mlp?
Also;
The castle doesn't appear where the library was, both of them are in different places.
Anyway, im likin' this story so far.
Foxy, with the save! He always was my favourite, from the pirate look, to the clawed hand and hook, to the fact he's just cooler than the others, he was always the best in my opinion. Also, I like the fact you have Foxy as a kinda 'protector' against the others instead of just a forth threat. Can't wait to see if Golden Freddy makes an appearance.
Nicely done. Do make a sequel
This is unbelievable, and an interesting spin to FNAF. Too bad that most people are fed up with FNAF MLP crossovers. I know this as a fact; my own FNAF fanfic got a ton of dislikes just because it covered a repetitive topic. Anyway, this is really good. I'm looking forward to more stories from you in the future!
5956252 Thank you. It'll probably be something different from FNAF though.
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I know. One can only write about something for so long before tiring of it. But I can tell that your stories are going to be awesome, FNAF or not. You just earned yourself a follower.
This should have more likes than it does, this is one of the better FNAF crossovers I've read. Well done!
You've definitely earned my interest
P.S
Love the pirate song.
third on my top 5 fav story on the whole site.
very good.
sadly, this story doesn't have enough like.
Alright final thoughts about this story. I loved it.
Griff personality I really enjoyed it. Foxy was helping, almost like a bobyguard. The FNAF story was pratically the same with some small changes, which is fine for me. It's about a game I really like to play. Nice details. Freaking Golden Freddy!
Happy and sad moments. I enjoyed the ending, the spirits watching them, and I knew it, Foxy's name Shadow Dash like Rainbow Dash, also a pegasus. And again, Pinkie did a tiny mistake but that helped against Golden Freddy. Overall, one of the best crossovers I have read so far, congrats my friend, this story deserves to be read, especially when listening to some FNAF songs. I also started making a FNAF crossover before I found this one, without the dark and scary things, but in a different way. I shall follow you. You deserve it!
5962645 Thank you.
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. The ending is really sad though. Honestly, if I could cry, I would've. I give this story a DOUBLE BOOM and 20,000 likes.
I honestly believe this is the best fnaf ponyfic on this site. It's a shame the story got hate bombed. None of those dislikes are deserved, I guarantee it. The jerks prolly didn't even read the first chapter...
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CORRECTION:
'Hold on, Dash,' she thought resolutely as she quickly raced out of the room, intending to find Spike. 'We're GONNA DIE!
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Awesome! Great Fic!
(If you know what I mean)
why? FNAF 2 is a prequel and could easily be explained as belonging to one of the previous owners. FNAF 3 takes place years after the place is shutdown and takes place In an amusement park inside a haunted house, witch has spring trap (aka the purple guy, not the kids) hunting you. can't be to hard to make it possible for FNAF 2&3 to be cannon.
Apple-Chans Lines Ponified:
"Well, y'all 're lookin' alright Dash," a familiar Southern drawl interrupted them.
Turning her head, Rainbow Dash smiled as she watched Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Twilight all walk towards them.
"Hey girls," she greeted them lamely, "How've ya been?"
"We could be worse," Rarity replied in that usual sophisticated manner of hers, then gave her a look that was equal parts curiosity and slight concern, "But I think if anypony among us has a tale to tell, it would be you, darling."
"Rarity's right, sugarcube," Applejack added with her own slight concern. "After Twilight and Pinkie got us all together on that there train, they told us about what ya wrote. Honestly, Iham still trying to wrap ma head 'round it."
"We were all worried about you," Fluttershy added her two bits in, her usual timid tone inflicting her every word. "I mean, if you were actually hurt..."
"Girls, girls," Rainbow quickly said, getting their attention. "I'm alright, alright? Look at me," she added with a quick spread of her wings and brief twirl around. "Completely, 100% a-okay."
She looked over at Twilight, who had yet to say anything in the conversation and had simply stared at her. "You hear that, Twilight?"
Twilight blinked, then shook her head. "Oh, uh, sorry about that," she quickly muttered, then gave a big grin as she suddenly reached out and hugged Dash herself. "It's good to see you're alright, Dash."
Dash blinked in surprise at the sudden contact, not expecting it from the alicorn, then chuckled and looked around as she returned the embrace. "Hey, where's Spike?"
"Back in Ponyville," Twilight answered her as she pulled away. "I just wanted him to come with us to the train station."
"So Rainbow Dash," Applejack then said, "Mind telling us about what happened while y'all were here?"
Rainbow Dash looked at all of them for a moment, then gestured. "I'll do even better. I'll show you and let you talk to the boss stallion."
"So this is the place?"
Dash looked over at Twilight, the one who had asked that question, as she pushed open the door to let everyone inside. "Yup," she answered, then looked over at the others. "So what do you think?"
Rarity had a slight look of disdain on her face as she surveyed the old and worn condition of the place, particularly where it was dirty and faded. "...Well, not to be rude Rainbow Dash, but to be perfectly honest, it looks rather... well, old."
"Sturdy though," Applejack added, less focused on appearance than on structure. "This here place looks like it was built to last."
"Umm... I have to agree with Rarity," Fluttershy said, her eyes flickering onto the slightly dirty windows and the posters of the three magic dolls. "It feels kind of... sad, though."
"Kind of looks like the setting to a good scary story," Pinkie replied. "It just needs to be a little darker and more creepy lighting. We could have the perfect Nightmare Night here!"
"The thought's crossed my mind."
The Mane Six all turned their heads to see Griff Schmidt walking towards them. "Care to introduce me, Rainbow Dash?" he asked with a slight smile.
Dash chuckled slightly, then pointed a hoof towards him. "Well girls, meet my boss, Griff Schmidt, third owner of Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria. He's a pretty cool guy, all things considered."
"A pleasure," Griff added, extending his hoof. "Ms. Dash spoke rather highly of you five as a group whenever the topic broached you. I must say, I'm rather honored to have such heroes of Equestria grace my humble, soon-to-be-ex-establishment."
Twilight, as befitting her station as princess, took the offered hoof into her own first. "The pleasure is ours, Mr. Schmidt," she replied warmly, much like how Celestia would act towards foreign ambassadors. "But, if it were possible, could you answer some questions? Rainbow Dash's letters said many things, but my friends and I would like to hear it from both of you personally."
Griff's expression changed to a more somber one, but nodded. "Of course, Princess." He looked towards the others, briefly bowing his head. "If I may insist, shall we go to my office? I would prefer we all speak in private in slightly more... comforting accommodations."
"Very well," Twilight agreed, "But you don't have to call me 'Princess'. Twilight Sparkle will do just fine."
A small smirk crossed Griff's face. "As you command."
A similar one crossed her own. "I prefer to think of it as a request."
He shrugged but didn't continue. Instead, he gestured to the others. "If I may," he said as he began to head towards his office.
The five stared after him for a moment. Applejack turned to Rainbow Dash.
"He always act all fancy-like?"
Dash shrugged. "Nah, he was always pretty easygoing when we were talking."
"Well, he certainly has manners," Rarity admitted. "It would rude of us to keep him waiting like this."
"Yeah..." Twilight added. "Let's go."
The journey didn't take that long and was rather uneventful. The only mishap that happened was when they passed near the show stage and got a good look at Bonnie, Chica, and Freddy.
"So these are the magic dolls you were talking about, Dash?" Twilight asked, her eyes locked on them as the scientist within her began to ask questions. "How old are they?"
"As old as the establishment itself," Griff answered her, not bothering to look at them himself. "Like I first told Dash, they're practically family... the kind you don't want to hang around other ponies for everypony's safety, that is."
Applejack gave them a once-over, a slight frown crossing her face at their expressions. "Pardon me if I agreed, Mr. Schmidt. They give me a bad gut feelin'."
Rarity had similar thoughts. "Indeed... though they also look like they could use a good wash as well. No need for them to look like they've been here since the founding of the restaurant as well."
Fluttershy seemed to shrink away from the dolls' gaze. "Umm, I don't know... they seem kind of sad to me."
Griff sighed. "Unfortunately, our budget's never allowed us the opportunity to give them any real good clean-ups. As for being sad... well, anypony be a little sad about their way of life coming to an end. Tonight's their last night after all."
"Is there gonna be a party?" Pinkie suddenly asked. "No business should go out without a party; it makes things a lot less sad when everypony splits up."
Griff chuckled. "Yeah, they'll be one. And you're all welcome to come."
Twilight suddenly blinked. "Wait a minute..." she turned to Dash. "You said there were four magic dolls. Where's the last one?"
Dash blinked. "You mean Foxy?" She waved over towards Pirate Cove. "He's in there. He's... broken, so they had to put him behind there."
"He's coming out for the finale though," Griff added. "He'll actually be the one who ends the party with his signature song." He then gestured towards his office. "But I believe you wanted answers first...?"
Twilight sighed, tearing her gaze from the dolls. "Lead the way."
They trudged on, Rainbow Dash taking up the rear. When she was the last one in the room though, she quickly turned and blew a raspberry towards Freddy.
Was it immature? Yes. Did she care? Not in the slightest.
Once they made it into Griff's office, he offered them all seats. To the surprise of Dash, he had apparently taken the time to rearrange his office in the time she had been gone to accommodate several chairs, though his desk was still in its normal, albeit slightly scooched back, position.
"Can I get you girls anything to drink?" he asked, bringing out several glasses. "Normally I'd offer some hard cider, but this isn't the sort of conversation I think would be appropriate for such a drink. In which case, I only have water." He punctuated that statement by bringing up a closed container with ice water. "It's fresh, by the way."
"That's fine," Twilight replied. "Thank you."
The others nodded their thanks as he poured them all a cup, then gave each one. He settled back into his chair.
"So..." he began, "How shall I start?"
"How about from the beginning?" Twilight offered.
He chuckled. "Well in that case, let's start with my grandpa, Management "Scott" Schmidt..."
And so he told them everything. Everything he knew about the pizzeria and its origins, from his grandpa to his father, from his own experiences to what Rainbow Dash had told him. Dash chimed in, recounting her experiences with the dolls, the recorded messages of Shep Book and her friendship with Foxy the Pirate Fox. Questions were asked, claims were disputed, but overall the other five just listened as the two of them told the dark tale of Freddy Fazbear's Pizza.
When it was over, Griff leaned back. "So there you have. I am the owner of a place haunted by the spirits of five dead foals, four of which possess the forms of the magic dolls and the fifth having taken the role of a simple typical ghost, and all save one is a homicidal spirit of vengeance that stuff their victims into Freddy Fazbear suits in a form of cruel irony for their own suffering. Your friend Rainbow Dash, with the aid of said one non-hostile spirit, has endured four nights of this torment because she wanted to make sure nopony has to suffer this job anymore and because she claimed that you five had the ability to end the foals' suffering. Your 'Rainbow Power', I believe she called it."
His voice took on a pleading tone. "Please, help me to help my family make amends for everything we've done, intentionally or not. Help me put an end to this nightmare."
The Mane Six were silent for the longest of moments. Rainbow Dash looked over at the others. Her mind was already made up to help and everypony already knew that, now she needed to hear what the others thought.
"...Well..." Fluttershy, surprisingly enough, was the one who spoke first. "If you really mean what you say... You don't want to see anypony else hurt because of what happened, and you want to help those foals... I'll help."
"Yes," Rarity added, a small smile gracing her face. "I am not be the best judge of character, but I believe you truly mean everything you say, and if Fluttershy also trusts your word, then I shall as well."
"Me three!" Pinkie added. "You don't want Freddy and his meanie friends hurting anypony anymore, and you helped Dashie all throughout her nights here. I trust you."
"...Can't say Iah agree with everythin' ya did," Applejack said slowly, "especially with the nightguards... but I can tell y'all aint lying either. Y'all really wanna make amends." She straighten her hat a bit. "Y'all can count me in."
Dash looked towards Twilight. "Well Twilight?"
"...Like Applejack, I can't condone everything you and your family have done, even if you had your reasons for it," Twilight admitted to Griff. "Especially with the nightguards."
Griff sighed. "Again, I'd be insulted if you did."
"But you really want to repent for all of this," Twilight added, a small smile gracing her face. "So I'll - we'll - help you."
Griff smiled at them all. "...Thank you, really."
Dash smiled. "What did I tell you? Piece of cake."
"Now we just have to wait until after the party," Rarity guessed, to which Griff nodded.
"To those foals, those four magic dolls are practically old friends. They'd want a chance to say their goodbyes."
"Can I help out with the party?" Pinkie asked Griff. "If it's going to be the last one Freddy Fazbear's Pizza has, you might as well make it epic and fun!"
Griff blinked. "Are you sure?" he asked. "I wouldn't want to impose-"
"Y'aller asking us to fire off a magic blast in the middle o' the place," Applejack reminded him. "Really, this isn't that much."
You're very much welcome.
~The Great Zoroark
I KNEW THERE WAS SHIPPING!!!! I TOLD YOU!!!!!
TRUELY A FOX AFTER MY OWN TASTES. Foxy is a badass who isn't afraid to defend a lady even if it means he gets banged up himself.
LIKE THE MOMENT SHE SAID SHE WOULD VISIT HIM EVERYDAY I WONDERED IF THERE WOULD BE ROMANCE BUT NOOOOOOOO, TEASE US ABOUT IT INSTEAD
Wow. Seriously, this is going right into my favorites! I just finished reading this!
I really liked this story!!!
Seems reasonable
Doesn't she work at night?
Its Canterlot, not Camelot
*sniff* i think i got something in my eye
This story is extremely sloppy and stupid so far… I love it, it is goofy.
Not a big fan of foxy talking, I do however like him being a good guy. I think for my own enjoyment of this story I am going to just ignore it lol.
Well. I think I’m gonna stop reading this here, I can’t really ignore them talking to eachother like that.