Hi my name is RainChaser, but i prefer to be called RC. im the middle child of three and the only pegasus. need aid, call me or eather of my sibling and the guard will help you. let the night be free
a fan goes to comicon dressed as a oc from dinosuar king and gets sent to equestria with his two imaginary friends and a deck of Dino cards. lets see how this ends up shale we? its time for the royal sisters to see what its like back in the cretaceous period!
short story to give a oc out to whoever wants to use him in their displaced story.
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I don't have a problem with Displaced stories, but holy crap, your grammar...
Jesus Christ, do I have to say this for all new Displaced stories?
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6104224 Exactly my thoughts. I couldn't even understand what was trying to be said half of the time.
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this is to be said to all of you...
IM HISPANIC AND HAVE ad(Asperger syndrome) with an in ability to find an edditor who I dont piss off.
so yeah. I speack english. And spanish, and small amounts of 3 other languages.
Not to mention that when I read a sentence it translates in to the corect grammar mentally befor I find the mistacks.
I have issues. So deal with it, I have to.
6105770 Having Asperger's does not make you incompetent. It's just part of the basic grammar we learn in school. Capitalization, punctuation, the basics. You're Hispanic, so you don't know basic English grammar? Don't use stuff like that as a crutch.
6105770 I know plenty of people with Asperger's who excel in writing, so that's no excuse. I also happen to do a lot of editing work for people with Spanish as a first language, and you know what? I don't mind their writing because at least they have a good attitude about it.
I spent the maybe first 10 years of my life using English with my friends, Japanese with my dad and his co-workers, and French at school. Plus I'm studying Spanish. So... I'm not seeing how that's an excuse.
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Aspurgers is not an excuse. I just suck at grammer and excell and ideas, one example is I know how to make knives guns and other items just from looking at them. People have insulted me for years cause of it, and I became cold hearted from it.
6106375 I have no skill with grammer.
so im sorry that I am not a good editor, and have bad grammer.
6106605 Still, do you not want to improve your writing? If you can't improve your grammar (and spelling and capitalization, I might add), then you can always have someone help you fix the mistakes.
6106612 *sigh* I end up making those who would mad or I dont get it back cause there too busy.
And im trying to improve my writing thats why I keep making stories.
6106689 Makes sense, I guess. Maybe find an editor who doesn't get mad easily and is willing to teach you?
6105770 NO. You cannot use Asberger's Syndrome as a free pass. I have Asberger's, and take a look at my writing. Don't think that it limits you any more than you let it.
Don't let your dreams be dreams. JUST DO IT.
AND YES YOU CAN. I believe you can, and you should too!
6108449 thanks for the support but i am ways away form the level i want to be. have you read 4428gamer's a brony life? this story is the one that got me on the fandom and in to writing. if i can be half as good as him i will be happy.
and again, i'm not trying to use Asperger's as a excuse.
The grammar is not bad,I Just feel like the story is rushed a bit
6278144 it was compleated in about 3 hours. Spread over three days. With about 3 failed attempts befor the final success.