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In the mirror world of equestria at Canterlot High it's valentine's day and everyone has a date all except for Rainbow dash who believes that it's because she doesn't act like all the other girls at CHS but she is not the only one that does not have a date Time Turner is a handsome guy who does the same things as everybody else but secretly he has always had a crush on Rainbow dash. Is it possible that on valentine's day he can admit his feelings to her and does she also have similar feelings for him?.

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It's pretty short, don't you? It's a nice idea, but you must explain everything, the feelings and how they are developed. I'm not the greatest Writer in this place, but I think that if you try hard, you can make a great story

In the mirror world of equestria at Canterlot High it's valentine's day and everyone has a date all except for Rainbow dash who believes that it's because she doesn't act like all the other girls at CHS but she is not the only one that does not have a date Time Turner is a handsome guy who does the same things as everybody else but secretly he has always had a crush on Rainbow dash.

Holy S*** that's one long A** sentence! There no punctuation t all except for the period at the end...howy sh**

Time Turner called himself Turner and I thought Pirates of the Caribbean. Nice story

I like it. Also nice coat. I need to get one of those. Cad Bane's hat and Sherlock Holmes 's coat.

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