There is this old rotten barn on sweet apple acres that needs to come down. The only problem is that Applebloom has some secrets stashed there that she dosen't want anypony to find out about. What happens when she decides to take matters into her own hooves and disobey Applejack?
I had a dream the other night where there was this couple who owned an old barn that was falling apart. Their daughter was playing in the barn when it collapsed on her and I woke up. It reminded me of Lesson zero when RD blows up the old barn, so, i decided to quickly typed this up before I forgot it. This is my first Fanfic ever, so please go easy on the hating.
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Damn it, I was hoping applebloom would be crushed to death under a pile of rubble.
Wasn't too bad
Mrs. Apple...?
599250 everypony keeps saying "Mrs. Sparkle" to Twilight, but I felt "Mrs. Jack" would be enough to signify that he was speaking to AJ.
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Don't they say "Ms."? As in when Celestia presents the award to Rainbow Dash in "Sonic Rainboom", she calls her "Ms. Rainbow Dash". My point was that "Mrs." denotes a married woman, and Applejack isn't married. Of course, she might (just about) be old enough to be widowed, but that's a whole other fic!
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Ohh, of course. Then, yes you are correct. It should be "Ms. Apple."
wow, 275 views. That's more than I had hoped for.
I hope you guys who did read it liked it, cause it seems to have been smothered by other more awesome stories.
That was a cute story!
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thank you
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You're welcome! Are you planning on writing any other stories?
720957 not yet. As I said in the description, This was completely a dream I had but I just ponified it. But I might try another crack at this stuff. it's fun
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Think I'll add you to my watch list and see what you come up with in time! 
Ooh here's a suggestion for you...since you like Derpy, why not write a story about her! 
It sure is fun! I remember when I first got started out on here (not too long ago actually). My first fic "The Princess Marks", wasn't and still isn't overly popular, but I kept writing away and now I have a few stories that are rather popular!
722114 wow, you read my mind, I was just starting to do some research when my notification went off. Cool, my first stalker!
Good story, seems pretty solid...
I guess the shortness of it and the very stereotypical 'slice of life' feeling does make it feel like 'not my thing', but the writing works well on the formatting / technical side.
*upvote*
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1314178 Swiper no swiping!
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BUT YOU DIDN'T SAY IT THREE TIMES
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To be honest, Swiper is clearly the victim here. He can't help being a kleptomaniac, it's the way he was born. And yet, instead of trying to help him, he's discriminated against. Disgraceful.
1314717 I'm not discriminatory. Everybody explodes like a nice squishy meat sack given enough bullet holes.
Good story... But at first... I had other thoughts about what was in the barn lol, if you think what I think
Possibility 1:
Possibility 2:
And other things..... But great story!
Damn, poor Apple Bloom, personally I say Apple Bloom rather then Applebloom because it seems more correct, but that's just me, a few errors here and there and for some reason I kept expecting AB to get a spanking....how odd
Though she is a bit to old for that but hey, got to do what you got to do. Not bad though felt rushed for some reason but it was enjoyable nontheless
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yeah, it was literally a dream I ponified within 30 min.
2636294 Better then nothing