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Derpy Fan 4eva


Derpy is putting Dinky to sleep and proceeds to read her a story. I have always loved the stories written and illustrated by Eric Carle, so I decided to do a crossover. This story is based off of Eric Carle's Walter the Baker. After that it's episodic events when somepony reads a story to either Dinky and/or Sparkler.

Edit: So, a lot of my followers loved this story so much that they've talked me into ponifying more children's books. So, if you want me to ponify a book you liked as a child, give me the title and the author in the comments or on my blog and I'll see what I can do.

http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/108024/derpys-night-time-stories <-- the request blog.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 40 )

By 'putting to sleep' do you mean literally or like a dog?
Looks interesting, will read later.

1536981 no, literally. WTF, why would the other one be rated everyone. :rainbowlaugh:

Well, forgive me for thinking outside the box.

:moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:
Four out of five moustaches.

> Her wings were so soar

> Spakeler’s comics

> nigh on unarguable
Um... that's a very strange turn of phrase. Try "nigh-unarguable".

> Shoppe
Unless the name of the bakery is literally "Shoppe", this should be "shop".

> Stink there you Discord damned dough!
I believe you mean "Stick"?

1545466 and thank you for not being a jerk about it. This was a very mature pointing out of grammatical flaws compared to what I've seen elsewhere.

I understand, but the "Sparkler" in "Sparkler's comics" is currently spelled "Spakeler".

Why would I be a jerk about trying to help? :rainbowhuh:
That just doesn't even make sense to me. If I was a jerk, I wouldn't bother actually telling you how to fix any mistakes.

1545503 Who here can ever understand the reasoning behind the wrath of trolls. My friend was once brought to tears after a hateful hacking of her story. Took her fans and myself a long time to coax her back into writing.

1545503 Ah, I see. You are right. Let me fix that. Thanks again. :derpytongue2:

Also: I loved Eric Carle when I was a kid (though I never read the particular book this is based on). And Ditzy/Derpy and Dinky are my favorite background characters. And that cover art is absolutely freakin' adorable. It was inevitable that I'd like the story. :scootangel:

Have a picture of General Derpy relaxing on a cloud. Because Derpy.

This story has so much dawwwww! :pinkiehappy:

1589534 You're welcome! :pinkiehappy: Also, just read your topic about trolls, and yeah, they're something else. Not sure what, though. I remember a while back, before I ever got into MLP, I'd already had people either want me to kill myself or something equally unpleasent or worse.

Always a better day when this updates.

i love it its nice sweet and fun! :twilightsmile:

Wow just wow that was so amazing I almost cried

Wow. I dug this wonderful fossil up, and it's not going to be completed? Aww....:applecry:

That book is full of feels...

But the part where Sparkler asks her to read it to her is full of feels too. Sparkler doesn't get enough D'aww moments. :fluttershysad:

It's not every day that I see a story of this caliber anywhere other than the top of the feature box. If you keep writing this much d'aww food, you'll end up going somewhere. Also, Feather is best Dinosaur.

Jack then went to Matilda the Cow

I think you accidentally a human in your adaptation...

I (and my younger nephew) love this series of stories.

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