What would you do if you had unlimited power at your fingertips?
What would you do if obtaining it meant the end of the world?
What would you do if the world didn't like you much anyways?
A Changeling war hero named Pandora is about to find out the answer, as the clock ticks down to the arrival of a dark force. No matter what happens, one thing is certain.
Pandora's box is opening, and all the evil in the world will soon be released.
Rated T for violence
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Chapters (3)
Interesting.
The way you wrote this story makes the stuff happening in this chapter a bit hard for me to understand though.
These lines especially threw me off. I mean, what are these lines supposed to be? Thoughts? Two mysterious beings talking to each other? That's what it seems. And they came up so suddenly too. Not even a slight mention of what they are was put out before they came up. And they just feel like a puzzle piece thrown and stuck together even though they don't exactly fit. You get what I mean?
Anyways, this is just my personal opinion, and I just really wanted to help you out ('cause no else has seemed to do that yet), and I know the feeling of... Happenings like this.
So, chin up. Back straight. And now you've got a follower.
5935549 Thank you. The two thoughts are of characters that will be revealed. All the same, the opinion is a great help.
Thanks for the follow!
Hmmm... Yesss... The pieces are coming together!