Illustrious primarch of the III Legion, turned renegade because the Imperium sucks. Experiencing pleasure unheard of and killing things since M31. Before that crusading and stuff.
A single Guardspony has twelve hours to live on the battle-scarred surface of Hall's Redemption. With no escape and no redemption, the remaining ponies of Imperial Guard fight a last ditch battle against the hated servants of Chaos. Until the world dies, the true nature of war and hate is reviled.
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It is... Interesting. You definitely have the whole "a day in the life of a guardsman" thing down pretty well... It's just I can't read this at the moment because I just went through the " popular all time section", and am now depressed for all the right reasons... Good luck to u, though
Um, I hope that's something I caused.
Looks to be good just a few things tho. (A imperial guard player myself, with the DK being my favourite)
1. Death Korps don't have names. They are drilled and brainwashed to forget their name and self preservation during training, with many death korps never receiving a name to start with (remember, the inquisition says they don't clone / use vita woming (they do))
2. Like stayed before they are drilled and brainwashed out of self preservation, so none of them would care if they died in this battle
Death Korps final litany 'In life, war. In death, peace. In life, shame. In death, atonement'.
3. You do know hab blocks can survive quite a few shells, and most guard regiments are hundreds -> tens of thousands strong. I don't think it would destroy a regiment from one shell and even then if it's a death korps regiment why is it sitting around like the other, both would be walking silently towards the nearest enemy firing line to die. (Small joke I always love about the death korps commissars. Is that unlike other world commissars shooting there men to go forward, the death korps ones have to shoot at the to retreat or risk losing all them to their death march)
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Thanks for the insight. I'm not sure if I can change the naming and other such embedded things at this point when I'm occupied on other fics. They're also Wh40k if you wanna check them out.
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Your welcome, sorry if it sounded insulting (sadly a warhammer nerd, so have fun with insults)
I'll check out your other stuff, plus if you want any info for 40k I'm up for a talk so send a message my way and I'll reply in a bit of time
Plus. FOR THE EMPEROR AND THE IMPERIUM.
just cause