Captain Vestus Benedicto, a recently renegade Space Marine from the Mantis Warriors Chapter, is torn. In the aftermath of the Badab War, he and his men feel that they will never again be accepted. As they travel far beyond Imperial space, they encounter an...interesting planet. After travelling into the Gheist Rift, they find the strange planet of Equestria, as the Marines of the Mantis Warriors try to adjust to their new neighbors the discover that they aren't the only ones who seek Equestria. As vile Dark Eldar of the Kabal of the Ninth Tide invade to torture and abduct the ponies of Equestria, the Mantis Warriors prepare to defend their temporary home.
Chapters (2)
A nice setup and fairly different start up from the norm. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for all the support! Ch 2 should be out soon enough. Stick around for more 40k updates I do on other fics
Anyone who reads this could post this on a fic-reading group to expand the views would be really awesome!
Pretty good
Looking good, Now to see where this is going
Ch. 2 Finally up!
Jade Raptors? you made that up, right?
Anyway. nice start
More!...
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No jade is the color of their armor. That's why its not capitalized.
The Raptors on the other hand are a loyalist chapter that fought on the side of the Imperium during the Badab War.
6576181Aha, now I understand why I was confused...
I googled *jade raptors* but found nothing
Remember guys, I really want to get this story out there and see what others think about it, so if anyone would be as kind as to mention this to other users who might like it or post it to a review group like Seattle Angels that would be the best thing ever!
I like this.
Shame this is dead