The extended life of an alicorn can be hard to deal with, you have to watch your life go on as other end, Celestia and Luna knew this lesson well, but Twilight was figuring this out on her own. The hard way, can she find some light in this?
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Very good, a little sad though
I was in a sad mood myself, it reflected how I was feeling when I wrote it. All my friends are in other places and I miss them all.
The story was kinda hasty, but it was very saddening. At least you have done a very good job on the emotion.
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Well it's been a long time since I have written anything, I know my pacing was a little off, hopefully my next work will be a little more thought out. That one was a spur of the moment to see if I could still get the words to sound right in my head. Hopefully I can shake off some of the rust and get back into it.
5859003 I didn't take it harshly I appreciate the comments regardless. I see the compliment and took it and did notice the pacing. I haven't written in years but I'll get better with time.
5859015 Great. Well, I'm hoping for more stories in the future
5859042 I did post another if you didn't notice
5859061 reply all you want, I'll be honest I'm enjoying it. But I'm going to bed soon. Let me know what you think of my other story if you get around to it.
5859066 I'll start on it right away! I will let you know what I think of it.