Rainbow Dash had never been more excited in her life! She was featured in a Daring Do book! She couldn't believe it. All her dreams had come true! She instantly showed Twilight and the rest of her friends. But discoveries are made, and questions are asked. There has never been a more important quest in her life. And she just hoped that she could find answers.
In Daring Do's cottage, the same discovery was being found. But with all the same questions, but nothing to start with, would she be able to find the answers she needed too?
Chapters (3)
An interesting concept, though one I'm not really fond of. Maybe you can change that.
A small suggestion? Try to separate RD and Daring's parts. I recommend:
Asterisks-
Or an "X's Point of View (POV)"
You get the idea- makes it a lot easier to read, really.
Anyways, good luck with your story!
Cool I wonder what happened to daring this is exciting can't wait fr the next chapter ^_^
Mysterious…i like it
come on daring tell her the part about her parents 
You...you go dark sometimes you know that?
Ha, ha, ha! Sorry, HarmonyRain! I guess I can't help myself sometimes!
……intense
Man is he stupid. you kidnapped and torture an Element of Harmony. Do you really want to mess with the princesses?
could have been better.
will there be more/sequel? because if there is Please kill Ahuizotl and both sisters live
*Imitating Victor Reznov* the nimbers Dasher Ahuizotl must die.
6584276 I'm glad you like it so much! I never thought of giving it a sequel, so what I want to do is give you the opportunity to write your own sequel. Just make sure to credit me
6589490 I'm not much of a writer, but I will ask around. Or maybe another reader of this will take it up.
6589938 Alright, as long as they remember to credit my story, I am fine with it.
Another interesting idea, though I have to say the characters are much more out of character than your other stories--demonstrating your improvement over time.
The next chapters look just as interesting as this one! I wonder what Daring has to say...
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Keep in mind, this was my very first story on here. I didn't have characters down yet
I think the only way this could've been better is if you didn't hint so heavily to them being siblings--though, how to do that, I have no clue. I'm loving it so far!
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That's what I meant! You've gotten much better since then!
I've read all of your writing so far and I've thoroughly enjoyed myself. I hope you continue writing so I can continue reading.