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night_shadow12

night_shadow12 #1 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · ·

You do know what a prequel is right?

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Neptunika

Neptunika #10 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · 1 ·

Listen everybody, all these comments are heartwarming yet on my over side mean BUT i will take your guys advice (And maybe i shouldn't of deleted your comments) And i'll get a friend to analyze it and upgrade the grammar and spelling.

I'm sorry for being rude to YOU guys! But please keep the comment friendly like these.

Dragonborne Fox

Dragonborne Fox #11 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5806966 To quote myself via picture:

i.imgur.com/021vfSO.png

I'm glad to see SOME change in your behavior, though.

Dodo Of Chaos

Dodo Of Chaos #12 · May 16th, 2015 · · ·

Hm.
I kinda like this writing style.

Caddy Finz

Caddy Finz #13 · Oct 11th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Ok so I went through and read it and as I scrolled down, I was eager to read other comments only to see them all deleted Anyway, It's nice that someone wants to get into writing (even if they may not be very good at it) but in all honesty you need a lot of practice. I hate to see someone try it once, fail and then give up Look at this as a learning experience and maybe try to get some advice and coaching from someone with more experience