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hi I like meeting new people so if you wanna just talk or something just pm me and we can start a conversation or something

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Drakeal is a foal with some differences to him but he's mostly a normal colt who grew up as a part of the hierarchy. After his family is attacked and killed by rebels he must leave his home and travel to Equestria where he will find friends , new family, and a few surprises on the way.

Chapters will vary in size. I will tag the chapters with the gore.

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Comments ( 8 )

he's mostly a normal filly

A filly is a young female equine, like Apple Bloom or Scootaloo. Young males are called colts. Also, Equestria should be capitalized since it's a proper noun.

Rainedash thank you for that I was unsure if fillies was a general statement for kids aswell as females

Hmm... This should be interesting...

“NOW, KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY OR I WILL MAKE YOU START TO BEAT YOURSELF”
“Oh yeah, like you can do that. You said you only watched you don't actually do anything- OW”
“Ha see now look what ya gone and made me do now, if you could please get on with the story”

Bucking hilarious! Also, you need to put commas where they're needed, but other than that, amazing job!

“Sis, you're an absolute genius.”

Just a small mistake I spotted, but a good chapter overall

Second I'm taking you to equestria to someone who you will be very happy to see.

Forgot to capitalize the I in I'm

What is this a crossover of?

7105032 the only things im purposely crossing over is doctor who and i took a character from deltora quest but other than that its unintentional.

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