Life is full of twists and turns and as such will even regress on itself. Meaning the past will come back to haunt you. Spike will learn this the hard way when a big shot director from Canterlot decides to turn his best selling novel, The Diamond's Eyes, into a play. As it would turn out, this director is none other than Diamond Tiara, his ex-marefriend and the one he almost proposed to.
Between dealing with this bombshell, a businessman has set his sights one owning The Silver Note, the club he, Pipsqueak, and Sweetie Belle have owned fro nearly two years. Intent on owning the jazz club at any cost, Bigwig resorts to underhanded tactics to procure it, even going so far as to use Sweetie's ex-husband. With the threat of losing the club and dealing with his past, Spike will find that facing the past and providing second chances will set all right in the world.
Edited by Stellar Spiral
Hmm, so this is the rewrite huh? I'm honestly not sure if I prefer this or the old one. I was mostly a little perplexed at how someone was able to hurt Spike with a simple punch considering that he's more grown now and shrugged off much more than that when he was a baby.
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I attribute it to earth pony strength and at younger ages kids can actually shrug off more pain that adults.
At this point I'm not sure if I like this or the old version more. Not sure why.
Hope this gets continued.
Didn't really get to the good stuff. The story is interesting. Hope you don't drop it as is. That would be a shame.