Just Another Night

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Sholuna

Sholuna #1 · Apr 8th, 2015 · · ·

Possible trigger: Hooker Twilight

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The Blue Grimoire

The Blue Grimoire #2 · Apr 8th, 2015 · · ·

5839090 Sorry . Chances are I won't do this kind of story again.

EbonHaste

EbonHaste #3 · Apr 8th, 2015 · · ·

5839136 well its not that bad honestly. but it does need a few edits bro.

1. Typo -

'Questions popped up in his head since the second he met her: Who is she? Is she a ~~voyer~~ voyeur or something?'

2.First person slip -

"Come now... Take a seat..." She pointed to the bed and I he went over without question, his cock standing proud between his legs.

3. Typo#2

~~Nervious~~Nervous, curious and obviously aroused by the situation.

4. Delete the word his

He fell back on his back, pushing his hips forward as ~~his~~ the magic sent steady vibrations all the way from his balls all through his shaft.

5. Typo, should be her

"Mmmph!" She gagged as he her stomach was flooded with every last droop of his thick seed.

And lastly

6.Typo

SeShe stood up and angeled his cock and teased his tip against her entrance, she could already feel herself edging closer.

There

The Blue Grimoire

The Blue Grimoire #4 · Apr 8th, 2015 · · ·

5839902 Oh man thank you so much! I though I got most of the typos but obviously I didn't, haha. I really appreciate it! I might have to come to you for edits on future stories :).

EbonHaste