• Member Since 30th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 27th, 2014

icilu2


PONIES!!!

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Twilight is bored...more bored than usual that is and cant find any problems to take care of ever since the changling invasion so she turns toward more...romantic solutions

P.S. Obvious Twidash is obvious

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

Good concept but needs some editing to catch those spelling mistakes. I'd suggest getting a beta reader. Other than that, good job!

Thx much appreciated feedback, honestly i wrote around 2 am and....well that and not having spell check on wordpad made it rather interesting...:twilightoops:

Well im pretty sure i can get the next chapter up by tommorow :rainbowkiss:
But after that its probbably going to be random based off when i feel the wasnt tp write but at LEAST one a week

P.S. Epic Twilgiht vs. Ursa Major battle seen next :pinkiehappy:

you my good sir/madam is truly evil by killing off rainbow dash... but i hope she isn't dead

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Ino good time, all shall be revealed

FIRST! grammar needs some work.

RBD better not be dead. again, grammar REALLY needs some work...check out mine! grammar and spelling is great. Rainbow better not be dead or Ill be all :flutterrage: and switch my thumbs up to an upside down thumbs up. get the hint? 3/6 or 2/7? Rainbow or no?

I won't reveal as to wether or not she is dead but the whole reason i havent wrote a chapter in awhile is so that my computer could get word on it so that i dont have to....keep...Using....NOTEPAD!!!!!! :flutterrage:

:fluttershysad: really :fluttercry:dis story is good:derpytongue2:

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Thank you hopefully have the next chapter up by the end of the week

wow this is good

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thanks i plan to finish it soon

619149 nice i realy liked the peak into the fight that you gave us

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thank you i appreciate it

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