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One cold Winter's day, a stallion ends up risking his life for a small filly. Now this stallion has to contend with his growing feelings for a certain Apple farmer, this filly's growing feelings for him, and the financial crisis that may lead to him losing his one chance to find love...
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I gotta say, liked it! Interested to see where this goes. Curious though, noticed you don't write the accents in, visa vies your Applejack says I instead if Ah. Not saying you should change it but do you find it challenging to balance the authenticity of her drawl with how easy the reader can comprehend the meaning?
Any way please write more I am here for the duration
>>Sipioc Thanks for the review. I guess in a way that thing about not writing the accent is true, I want to make sure what I write is 100% understandable. I've actually been thinking that maybe I can use it to show her change in emotions; if she became upset of angry, the accent would become more pronounced and would change from 'I' to 'Ah'. I a few more reviewers touch on it, I'll probably change it
Very underrated story. You should definitely continue this, I'm usually not too fond of OC love interests but Oak Splitter immediately comes off as likeable and your writing style is what drew me in pretty quickly.
............okay, okay, I want to see what happens next. it's like one of those tv shows that have you at the edge of your seat right at the end of the episode.
Gripping! Good imagery, I could almost feel the cold wind standing on the side of that lake and leaves you wanting more.
How goes it with the next chapter?
An enjoyable long awaited chapter but I noticed a slight problem when AJ enters the room
"Howdy" She replies gently, asmall. ....curling up her face
A small what per chance?
6714784 Thanks for pointing that out, it has been rectified
I thought this story might've been canceled. Glad to see that it isn't. I definitely enjoyed this chapter and will be looking forward to more during the Holliday break.
I wonder what Oak Splitter will get into next...
This was the second fav story I had here when I started, so nice to see it came out of the ice.
I'm eager to see how this story will develop in future chapters. (Assuming it's still being worked on, hopefully?) so far we have a pretty decent beginning, and I'm hooked to see it unfold. I wish you good luck!