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Arn


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A Unicorn captain has rescued a stallion from what would have been a terrible death. He decides to be his friend. One very important thing the stallion needs in this magical land, a name.

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Arn

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Glad you do. I will continue. If you see anything that you think could stand a little improvement let me know.

You know, instead of using the "I don't remember my name" clicé , you can choose a normal name with a little imagination. David (Beloved ) Shepherd or Peter ( Stone ) William (Willingness ) = will of stone . and many others I bet yours too have a meaning, why don't you go an check?

Arn

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Seriously.
Thanks for the comment, I am grateful.
A name is coming, just enjoy the story, because I'm not done yet.

If you want to comment more, thanks!=)

I didn't understand nothing of what happened

Arn

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I have gone and worked it over.
Care for another look?

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