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Zoey888VGtech


I am a beginning writer, hoping to improve my skills as I both write and read.

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After the Crystal Kingdom was saved from the tyrannical rule of King Sombra, ponies were left to assume he was dead. However, this is false. The king lives sheltered among peasants. King Sombra must find a way to live as a hornless unicorn. But will the dark stallion learn of better ways in the process?

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Title ideas and possible future cover images/ideas are highly appreciated! :pinkiehappy:

Remind me to read this tomorrow.

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Actually, that's not a first. I've reviewed a story called "Title Pending" before. It was about 4 months ago.

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Actually, a site search reveals two stories named "Title Pending" and the story I mentioned last comment is now called "Around the Town We Go".

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It is a cool story, actually. Mostly in that it has no heat, in the metaphorical sense.

Update, new title. Does this improve a bit?

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